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Soilder's Love (Read 343 times)

Started by ExShadow, December 02, 2009, 08:45:41 pm
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Soilder's Love
#1  December 02, 2009, 08:45:41 pm
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This poem was written by me and my friend Sianna, please read and leave an opinion.

Time ticks by and the world keeps spinning round..
So many things that happen that make our thoughts go round and round
Things unclear make us confused, In our mind's an echoing sound..
The vast majority sometimes get, but others just fall all the way to the ground

The strongest remain standing with their bravest hearts
living still going strong.. but the rest that have fallen must learn a way
Find a glowing path in the shadows to stop them falling apart..
in order to keep going amongst this dreadful day.

Some one open up their hearts and pour in the love
the love that was lost along that other dark path
Hold them close, give them strength to rise above
hold them firmly hold them tight
so they stay strong through all their nights

Cause you're the soldier that can bring warmth into their eyes
Time will tick by, and the world will spin, but they will rise
To the skies....x.....
Last Edit: December 02, 2009, 09:32:49 pm by ||Silent Kill||
Re: Soilder's Love
#2  December 03, 2009, 10:05:51 pm
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good post.. u got a future in poetry  ;D


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