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Started by lui, January 13, 2015, 08:11:51 am

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Luis's Sketches
#1  January 13, 2015, 08:11:51 am
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So, I've been doing some character art lately and I thought i would share some to get some feedback and criticism as well :)
I will probably post a sketch every 2 days because I have nothing better to do for a bit
Anyways, here's a quick 10 Minute draft of Kyosuke from Rival Schools (Sorry for crappy quality, I don't have a scanner and my phone's camera sucks. It looks MUCH better in person.)

I know I have ALOT to fix and clean (like that ugly-ass hand. Hands are my weakness :( ), after all this is only a 10 minute draft.
I'm going for a MVC2 artwork-like look with its shading, what do you guys think?
By the way, I ONLY do sketches. I am horrible doing digital art or anything with color. (I don't know why, colors on my sketches ruin it.)
EDIT: started prioritizing on shading his facial structure and upper body, finished the hand, but I still need to clean it and correct the shading. Re-did the line work on the left arm and improved face shape. I also fixed that awkward hair he had, but I need to clean the left over eraser marks still. Again, sorry for the low quality. It looks really clean in person or in HD.
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Last Edit: January 13, 2015, 09:16:36 pm by luisdude1
Re: Luis's Sketches
#2  January 13, 2015, 01:58:57 pm
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Seems pretty cool. I'm only somewhat bothered by the face outline's shape being too round, and the head shape in general seeming a bit tilted. But it's still pretty nice, you should eventually try looking for a way to apply colors to your sketches digitally, because I've seen people doing that here and there.

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Re: Luis's Sketches
#3  January 13, 2015, 02:20:13 pm
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ah, gotcha. I just noticed it now. And well, I'll half to wait on getting an actually good laptop in the future, as this laptop always has photoshop CS6 crash on me whenever i try to even click on Magic Eraser. Oh whale. Thanks for the input!
Re: Luis's Sketches
#4  January 19, 2015, 04:34:09 am
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HOLY SHIT, I loved the MvC2 styled pose for his sketch :D

As you said, I will convert this sketch to a Hyper Port. for his level 1 Hypers :D [For Omega Combo I will make the special port animations from Project Justice ^^ ]

Nice job man, keep it up ^^
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Re: Luis's Sketches
#5  January 19, 2015, 04:36:48 am
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wow man thanks for the nice words. I should be done in about 1 day, maybe 1 and a half. I will start on Hinata after, then Batsu.
It's a shame my Camera sucks. It looks very clean and Hi-res up in person.
If you want I can also do the special port anims for the team-up hyper.

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Re: Luis's Sketches
#6  January 21, 2015, 11:31:00 am
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took a break from my MUGEN sketches so i can draw some of dem waifus yo

Obviously it's a WIP.
(again, my camera quality is pure crap. it is very clean and nice in person.)
Re: Luis's Sketches
#7  January 21, 2015, 11:43:39 am
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It's looking pretty good. I just can't get used to her face, though. Her chin is rather pointy, and the structure in general seems weird. In my opinion, you could try making the eyes a bit smaller and make the lip seem more natural.

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Re: Luis's Sketches
#8  January 21, 2015, 12:02:25 pm
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thanks for the input. and the eyes are smaller in person, the lighting just made the blacks on the eyes and eyelashes merge with eachother.

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Re: Luis's Sketches
#9  June 16, 2015, 02:06:50 am
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wup-wup.
Re: Luis's Sketches
#10  June 16, 2015, 02:23:07 am
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Hair detail is amazing, but the face is... oddly distorted, and the ear is a tad too small. Were those intended effects?

Also, do you have a tablet (iPad or Samsung Galaxy Tab rather than Wacom if you don't have the money for the latter)? If yes, then I highly recommend you get Autodesk Sketchbook Mobile, and upgrade to Essentials (which is free). You might like it. :)
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Re: Luis's Sketches
#11  June 16, 2015, 03:05:24 am
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What ear? I didn't draw a visible ear.
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#12  June 16, 2015, 03:21:34 am
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