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Started by Jughead Jones, February 23, 2008, 07:55:23 pm
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#1  February 23, 2008, 07:55:23 pm
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comments, critiques?
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#2  February 24, 2008, 12:03:13 am
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Not being a graphics artist myself, I can only say that:

- B. Bowser has some serious color loss, may just be the format
- B. Bowser doesn't really blend with the design, nor does the text
- Try saving in a better format like PNG

Never save in JPEG if you want quality.

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#3  February 24, 2008, 12:07:12 am
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Did you just randomly smudge two of the same Apophysis fractals?
you can't mixup a blind man, and you can't out think a brick ~skisonic
Street fighting is all about analysis, prediction, and reaction. That's it.

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#4  February 24, 2008, 12:34:27 am
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b.bowser looks like he's randomly slapped on a random background and a random font is slapped on the whole thing, it's a contrast and perspective issue...

try to make the text have more smoothness(a matter of color ?)



the only thing I liked there is the background and the fact that someone is running between those 2 aramdillos or whatever...



maybe the main problem is the source of light partitioned on the different elements, and again "contrast"
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#5  February 24, 2008, 12:47:39 am
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Really didnt slap on everything randomly-used a tutorial.  Back to the drawing board.  Thx for the critiques and comments.  I'll try to post another one up soon.
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#6  February 24, 2008, 01:05:33 am
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Can I get a link to said tutorial? Also, join a GFX site if you want to get better critiques for your sigs.

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you can't mixup a blind man, and you can't out think a brick ~skisonic
Street fighting is all about analysis, prediction, and reaction. That's it.

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#7  February 24, 2008, 01:52:55 am
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#8  February 24, 2008, 04:54:30 am
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Heres my second...

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#9  February 25, 2008, 01:55:22 am
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Yeah...um...where to begin on that one...

You know what I'll let TempesT or stock or someone tear that one apart.

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#10  February 25, 2008, 10:52:27 pm
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