Daeron said, December 13, 2015, 02:23:57 pmGoku ssj4HOLYYYYYY SHIIIIIIIIIETTTTTTTTT BRRRRRRRUH. *wish mode* now make SSJ2 Gohan, oo oo and SSJ3 Goku dragon fist, oh oh oh and uhm, OOLONG PLEASEEE.
Good Christ, calm down with your wishing. It's not cool to loudly request things out of nowhere like that.But yeah, great sprite. His pecks just look a little bit flat and could use some more shading to give them more depth, but it's still really great.
Hope you don't mind Daeron, I made some fixes of my own to practice sprite detailing, and to see if I can still nail this style.Nothing much, but I think it makes a difference.
The chest certainly looks better now. Although as far as I know, nipples are supposed to be lower than that, and you might want to make them a bit darker.
MotorRoach said, December 15, 2015, 06:32:57 pmThe chest certainly looks better now. Although as far as I know, nipples are supposed to be lower than that, and you might want to make them a bit darker.Noted for future stuff.
MotorRoach said, December 15, 2015, 06:14:19 pmGood Christ, calm down with your wishing. It's not cool to loudly request things out of nowhere like that.But yeah, great sprite. His pecks just look a little bit flat and could use some more shading to give them more depth, but it's still really great.i was kidding lol with slight seriousness
Well Im lazy so I did only 3 frames lol but Im proud for my first time doing animations taking my time I know the right hand is very weird. Oh and credit to Balthazar for the Concept Art of Krillin!Spoiler, click to toggle visibiltyEDIT:I did some more I know the belt is a little too skinny and it feel like it need 1 more frame to fix it up and run a little more smooth lol also after 4 loops he will blink!Spoiler, click to toggle visibiltyEDIT:Did a super Lazy Charge state lol I was going to do the pants thing but I cant Im trying to do This for the Krillin lolSpoiler, click to toggle visibilty
KomuruZukitaki said, December 29, 2015, 11:30:42 pmWell Im lazy so I did only 3 frames lol but Im proud for my first time doing animations taking my time I know the right hand is very weird. Oh and credit to Balthazar for the Concept Art of Krillin!EDIT:I did some more I know the belt is a little too skinny and it feel like it need 1 more frame to fix it up and run a little more smooth lol also after 4 loops he will blink!What you did here is pretty good, though i fixed up a couple things for you
KomuruZukitaki said, December 30, 2015, 05:04:33 amPretty Good man What program do you use? I used GIMP but it's still pretty confusingThanksI use Paint dot Net (For the sprite itself, for gif making i use a random website)
Line art is still too rough, you got to to work on that mate, and shading as well. Since he's wearing some form of cloth, bends should seep into the lights.Make use of all the colors you have, don't just limit one color to one job. For instance, use the mid-tones sparingly, like in CvS2 sprites, don't just limit them to an anti-aliasing job for the lights.Certain body parts need correction, the hands, and feet most notably. And I believe he's missing some detail, such as the Asian emblem (IDK if its Chinese or Japanese, but I'm leaning toward the former, considering his name is Tao), are missing. Take a look at this before/after, and see what you can apply to your future sprites. I'm sure with lots of practice/patience, you can do better:
Zaitsu Hatter said, January 01, 2016, 02:20:04 amLine art is still too rough, you got to to work on that mate, and shading as well. Since he's wearing some form of cloth, bends should seep into the lights.Make use of all the colors you have, don't just limit one color to one job. For instance, use the mid-tones sparingly, like in CvS2 sprites, don't just limit them to an anti-aliasing job for the lights.Certain body parts need correction, the hands, and feet most notably. And I believe he's missing some detail, such as the Asian emblem (IDK if its Chinese or Japanese, but I'm leaning toward the former, considering his name is Tao), are missing. Take a look at this before/after, and see what you can apply to your future sprites. I'm sure with lots of practice/patience, you can do better:Thanks!I tried to make some corrections based on your sprite:I only used the midtones as anti-aliasing because I used Goku Z2 sprites as a reference, but looking at newer Z2 sprites I can see it's used more nowThe emblem I didn't do because I though the kanji wouldn't look good in a sprite of this size, but I added it in and I think it came out decent
This is my first time doing a trace. This is cooler from Dragonball Z Shin Budokai I shaded it all by myself except the Feet Hands and Tail (Those all came from Frieza) I know I cant do hands, feet, nor tails. But the outcome is really good to me I'm also not sure if it's Z2 Style so let me know what y'all think!
FastFlash said, January 01, 2016, 12:23:21 amI haven't finished editing it, but you can see how I worked from your sprite:The lower part of his uniform should not receive light by the way.KomuruZukitaki said, January 01, 2016, 05:29:23 amThis is my first time doing a trace. This is cooler from Dragonball Z Shin Budokai I shaded it all by myself except the Feet Hands and Tail (Those all came from Frieza) I know I cant do hands, feet, nor tails. But the outcome is really good to me I'm also not sure if it's Z2 Style so let me know what y'all think!The base is good.- Now think about the lightsource. Since the light comes from above, like the tail and the hands, his body's shading must be changed.- Also the left foot (viewer's right) looks bigger than his right foot (viewer's left). Keep the right foot (viewer's left) and fix the left foot (viewer's right).- His eye also looks too big.- Another thing I've just remembered, be sure to check his height with FreezaZ2 and GokuZ2.
Sin- said, January 01, 2016, 02:06:46 pmFastFlash said, January 01, 2016, 12:23:21 amI haven't finished editing it, but you can see how I worked from your sprite:The lower part of his uniform should not receive light by the way.More fixes:I edited the face using yours as a referenceI tried not putting light in the lower part of his uniform, but I think mine looked a bit bland(?) without it, so I added in some shading with the midtones
