tryna get back into spriting posted in the wrong thread earlierfor some odd reason the skin messed up when turned into a gif file
Alex Sinigaglia said, June 10, 2014, 12:33:39 pmIs it intended to be Z2 style? Because if yes, this is the wrong thread and I'll move the post.yea sorry about that just saw the correct thread now
My first attempt at spriting anything, ever. Used Balthazar's Gohan as a base for the lower-half. I think it turned out okay considering my lack of any knowledge.I'm open to criticism. I had a lot of fun making this and wouldn't mind getting better!
Nice try ! Some issues:-the darkest tones are way too dark, they are all bordering on black-lightest tones should not be along the edges, the shade after that should border it (top of the arm, head).-his front hand is completely undefined. As is his chin.-the rear front arms is shaded as if it was a spherical object (like a ball), instead it's more like a pipe.-Dark shades should seperate his overlapping arm from the rest of his body. Kinda like you did with his collar, but the line is way too thick (it's like 2 pixels thick, should be only 1).That's all I got for you now, maybe someone else can be a little more in-depth.
Umezono said, August 08, 2014, 08:40:42 pmhow can anyone be more in-depth than the person who created the style D:While I agree with this, there's also some pretty basic flaws that have nothing to do with the style (and I think Balth already covered those too anyway)
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/221/e/c/buu_z2__early_by_likiji123-d7udz9v.pngi had a try at the z2 style but i haven't finished because im not good at shading (also this was my first try at spriting)
likiji123 said, August 09, 2014, 01:46:40 pmi had a try at the z2 style but i haven't finished because im not good at shading (also this was my first try at spriting)It's a bit too small.
@alex sinigaglia thx for the feedback i may do that now but for now i added shading to the sprite http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/221/e/9/buu_z2_with_shading_by_likiji123-d7ue1om.png
i tried to do a enlarged version and here's how it turned out http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/221/4/2/buu_z2__updated__by_likiji123-d7ue6jc.png