The Mugen Fighters Guild - Gene from God Hand

blackwind677

Gene from God Hand

#1 December 30, 2015, 03:01:32 pm

Newbie animator who's a newbie spriter

This is my sprite of Gene from the PS2 cult-classic, God Hand.
Due to my limited access to a PC, it took alot of time to just animate the stance. I haven't even got to the basic attacks, but I will.

hatter

Re: Gene from God Hand

#2 December 30, 2015, 03:09:47 pm

Somewhere between Guilty Gear and real rap
ey b0ss

It looks nice. Some feedback:

1. The arms from the biceps onwards look extremely wide. Gene has a lean muscular build, this seems like he took steroids and exercised those parts only.
2. His upper body is too big. Bring it down a bit.
3. Shading on the torso should be minimized a bit: Do it until the lit parts of the chest.
4. His eye is way too small, even if he is squinting. Considering this is a hi res sprite, make it larger.
5. Hair needs a bit more detail in the front.

All in all good work, but from my Galaxy Tab, it looks unanimated, so IDK if you animated it or not. Keep up the good work regardless.

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blackwind677

Re: Gene from God Hand

#3 December 30, 2015, 03:31:55 pm

Newbie animator who's a newbie spriter

Yeah.... I'd figure the arms and upper half would be one of the complaints. Thanks for being honest. I'll get to it!

blackwind677

Re: Gene from God Hand

#4 December 30, 2015, 03:36:45 pm

Newbie animator who's a newbie spriter

Oh! And it's unanimated on purpose. This is just the pose for said animation stance.

hatter

Re: Gene from God Hand

#5 December 30, 2015, 03:44:18 pm

Somewhere between Guilty Gear and real rap
ey b0ss

Ah, OK. Don't worry man, you did a good job on the sprite, just some feedback to make it perfect! And a small bit of advice, double posting on the forum isn't exactly liked because it usually takes attention from other threads/posts that appear on the Recent Posts section of the home page. If you want to refer to more people or add something to your post, use the Quote/Modify Buttons, they are your friends.