I admit that i'm not really good in english! and I need help for my letter of Intent! somebody, please help me correct my grammar :'(
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Good day Sir, I am writing this letter for you to know that I am interested to be one of the scholars of your scholarship program. I may be in the despair to say this but I need a scholarship to finish my studies for the reason that my family cannot support my costly school fees and I dropped my job so I can pursue my dream of having a bachelor’s degree , and sooner to get a better job and help my family.
I have completed a 2-year course from Dalubhasaan ng Lunsod ng San Pablo in 2017 with Academic Distinction and would like to pursue my studies to BS Degree but my father did not allow it and decided me to get a job because he can no longer support me and my siblings if I continue my studies. I took a year off to work and help my other siblings in their schooling, and now I am given another chance to get back to school. This scholarship will help me work towards my dream of becoming a BS Degree graduate and motivate my performance in a great way.
I am hoping that you will consider me as one of the deserving candidates for this scholarship as I can assure you of proving every bit worthy of it. Thank you so much and more blessings to come.
Yeah I got this.
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"Good day Sir, I am writing this letter for you to know that I am interested to be one of the scholars of your scholarship program. I apologize if I may sound desperate to say this but I need a scholarship to finish my studies. My family cannot support my costly school fees and I resigned on my job so I can pursue my dream of having a bachelor’s degree, so I can be one step closer into getting a better job and help my family.
I have completed a 2-year course from Dalubhasaan ng Lunsod ng San Pablo in 2017 with Academic Distinction, and would like to pursue my studies to Bachelors Degree, but my father did not allow it and decided to get me a job, because he can no longer support me and my siblings if I continue my studies. I took a year off to work and helped my other siblings in their schooling, and now I am given another chance to get back to school. This scholarship will help me work towards my dream of becoming a Bachelors Degree graduate and motivate my performance in a great way.
I am hoping that you will consider me as one of the deserving candidates for this scholarship, as I can assure you of proving every bit of worth on my behalf. Thank you so much in advance and have a blessed day."
Here you go. All grammar fixed.