No, it does not. You post that sprite again, it gets trashed. You keep posting it, you get a time out. Either actually work on it or move on.

no. i'm not going into the specifics on why it doesn't look good, i'll say this in a way you'll understand.

Try to study how the character designs look first before doing anything. Right now it's very apparent you do not know what you are doing in terms of this specific style.

 Try to practice art in general before tackling something like this.

I suggest you actually look at sprites in this style because your attempt bears no resemblance to the style whatsoever.

Looks more like one of those TOON sprites instead of the anime kinda style.

It's your sprite, why are you just expecting someone else to come along and fix it? Take initiative, take responsibility!

It's your sprite, why are you just expecting someone else to come along and fix it? Take initiative, take responsibility!

Well you are not exactly too wrong with the tones per color number (3 out of 5), but the body proportions and shading doesn´t fit all the style of the Topic IMO.
Also may want to darker that shading and outline since is barely notable.

Looks more like one of those TOON sprites instead of the anime kinda style.

That does not fit with the theme.

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You're asking for help but then asking for someone to do it for you.

Just make an explode and put it at 0,0. Then in the animation, put onion skin on and position it where it's supposed to be.