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in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pm
Board: Graphics
ok. thank you 
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in [SPANISH ONLY] Español solamente V2 (Started by Titiln July 14, 2010, 03:57:43 am
Board: International
Hola, ¿pueden por favor darme una critica dura para poder mejorar mis dibujos?
De verdad me ayudarian. Denme un momento.
http://mugenguild.com/forum/topics/trying-be-pro--162502.0.html
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in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pm
Board: Graphics
I see. More detail in general. Thanks.
one more question about style: I should keep a clean line (1st pic) or change to rough style like 2nd pic?
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in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pm
Board: Graphics
no coloring in this one Markpachi.
Some people said : "the draw is fine but is not amazing ....need something else"
What is that "something else"?
For example: yesterday I tried to use more energy in those lines:
and just recived silence.
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in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pm
Board: Graphics
Hi. good enought to think this work was drawed for a pro?
As always need your usefull comment.
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in [SPANISH ONLY] Español solamente V2 (Started by Titiln July 14, 2010, 03:57:43 am
Board: International
Nosé si ya lo vieron pero les comparto esto que encontré
https://vimeo.com/86349080
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 am
Board: Graphics
ok. I will.
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 am
Board: Graphics
Thanks ink but Kim is a genius.
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I got one more question:
i started a draw last week. Sharing every day the last update.
as allways i shared on facebook (25000 users - aprox) sadly received 0 likes and 0 comments.
In my opinion is a solid draw (until now) but if 25000 guys think otherwise maybe is a bad draw.
The problem here is: I can not be an honest critic of my work.
Please, tell me again if is a good draw or is a poor draw. (its the last time for a while to not weary. it's a promise)
(1 likes)
(0 likes)
(2 likes)
(yesterday) (0 likes)
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 am
Board: Graphics
Most of the lines look squiggly and messy, but I guess it's an art style thing.
Do you have plans on coloring the piece?
Not for now. Im trying to be consistent on my draw.
Nice. Everything looks good to me. Did you draw this from what you thought or what you saw?? It also reminds me of that 80's music video "Tale on Me."
saw from magazine.
The back view looks really good. The legs, t-shirt design, and face on the front view, not so much.
Yes, I'm think the same way.
Do you think that would ruin the picture?
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 am
Board: Graphics
Thanks for comment.
no traced, no pencil. (copy from magazine)
It is acceptable for a rookie but you say it has professional quality?
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 am
Board: Graphics
Hi.
The same thing.
I'm trying to be "pro" (illustration area)
Yours feedbacks help me a lot. I was trying to follow all yours advices.
Here the newest draw:
what do you think?
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in Please. Need feedback. (Started by TITAN MADRE November 13, 2013, 05:21:06 pm
Board: Graphics
Markpachi: had problems testing eye effects. Finally use egg ball eyes.
Like walt said, his right arm is like ice. In fact is some type of rock. I'm failed, I couldn't show it properly.
Fello: Thanks for your comment,
Yes, I can see it now . The head looks tiny.
About eyes i will study more. Its a technical problem. I couldn't find a ink solution.
Walt: Yes, his right arm is turning into Ice rock.
About sketch thing... No round nails. Ok. I will.
Thanks all of you for those useful feedback.
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in Please. Need feedback. (Started by TITAN MADRE November 13, 2013, 05:21:06 pm
Board: Graphics
Hi,
I need some feedback.
good or bad, likes or not. Its not important.
I need to know if works or not. If not, please tell me why.
Thanks.
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in [SPANISH ONLY] Español solamente V2 (Started by Titiln July 14, 2010, 03:57:43 am
Board: International
nosé si ya lo vieron pero lo pongo. Me pareció bueno.
http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1661802484/hyper-light-drifter
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE September 03, 2013, 07:18:11 pm
Board: Graphics
Glad to read you walt.
as you know english is not my first (or second or something) language. Sorry for that.
to the point.
Try to improve: face anatomy (poor), leave dirty line style (no sale), choice a stronger color palette (now is not keeping viewer attention).
Acceptable things: body anatomy.
Good advices.
So first, i need change the style. From there, work on line, color and anatomy. Right?
how about to the composition?
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in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE September 03, 2013, 07:18:11 pm
Board: Graphics
please, i don't know if i am going for a right way. I can't see if my work is good or not.
Im not find any comment from deviant or fb or blog so i start to think is poor quality work. I don´t know.
A good or bad feedback help me a lot.
lthis pic looks like pro?
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in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 am
Board: Graphics
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in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 am
Board: Graphics
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in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 am
Board: Graphics
Thank you Noside. I'm glad for you support.
I will try to make another complete diferent thing next time 
For those who want to suscribe to my facebook: http://www.facebook.com/cuerno.muerto
Sorry. not to friend request. just suscription.
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in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 am
Board: Graphics
Thanks man, sadly a couldn't find a fx fume or similar plugging to add the smoke effect for missile stella.
The animation for that reason is deleted until find any of those.
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in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pmBoard: Graphics
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in [SPANISH ONLY] Español solamente V2 (Started by Titiln July 14, 2010, 03:57:43 amBoard: International
De verdad me ayudarian. Denme un momento.
http://mugenguild.com/forum/topics/trying-be-pro--162502.0.html
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pmBoard: Graphics
one more question about style: I should keep a clean line (1st pic) or change to rough style like 2nd pic?
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pmBoard: Graphics
Some people said : "the draw is fine but is not amazing ....need something else"
What is that "something else"?
For example: yesterday I tried to use more energy in those lines:
and just recived silence.
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in Trying to be pro (Started by TITAN MADRE September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pmBoard: Graphics
As always need your usefull comment.
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in [SPANISH ONLY] Español solamente V2 (Started by Titiln July 14, 2010, 03:57:43 amBoard: International
https://vimeo.com/86349080
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 amBoard: Graphics
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 amBoard: Graphics
---------------------------------------------------
I got one more question:
i started a draw last week. Sharing every day the last update.
as allways i shared on facebook (25000 users - aprox) sadly received 0 likes and 0 comments.
In my opinion is a solid draw (until now) but if 25000 guys think otherwise maybe is a bad draw.
The problem here is: I can not be an honest critic of my work.
Please, tell me again if is a good draw or is a poor draw. (its the last time for a while to not weary. it's a promise)
(1 likes) (0 likes) (2 likes) (yesterday) (0 likes)
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 amBoard: Graphics
Most of the lines look squiggly and messy, but I guess it's an art style thing.
Do you have plans on coloring the piece?
Not for now. Im trying to be consistent on my draw.
Nice. Everything looks good to me. Did you draw this from what you thought or what you saw?? It also reminds me of that 80's music video "Tale on Me."
saw from magazine.
The back view looks really good. The legs, t-shirt design, and face on the front view, not so much.
Yes, I'm think the same way.
Do you think that would ruin the picture?
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 amBoard: Graphics
no traced, no pencil. (copy from magazine)
It is acceptable for a rookie but you say it has professional quality?
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE February 03, 2014, 01:36:24 amBoard: Graphics
The same thing.
I'm trying to be "pro" (illustration area)
Yours feedbacks help me a lot. I was trying to follow all yours advices.
Here the newest draw:
what do you think?
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in Please. Need feedback. (Started by TITAN MADRE November 13, 2013, 05:21:06 pmBoard: Graphics
Like walt said, his right arm is like ice. In fact is some type of rock. I'm failed, I couldn't show it properly.
Fello: Thanks for your comment,
Yes, I can see it now . The head looks tiny.
About eyes i will study more. Its a technical problem. I couldn't find a ink solution.
Walt: Yes, his right arm is turning into
About sketch thing... No round nails. Ok. I will.
Thanks all of you for those useful feedback.
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in Please. Need feedback. (Started by TITAN MADRE November 13, 2013, 05:21:06 pmBoard: Graphics
I need some feedback.
good or bad, likes or not. Its not important.
I need to know if works or not. If not, please tell me why.
Thanks.
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in [SPANISH ONLY] Español solamente V2 (Started by Titiln July 14, 2010, 03:57:43 amBoard: International
http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1661802484/hyper-light-drifter
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE September 03, 2013, 07:18:11 pmBoard: Graphics
as you know english is not my first (or second or something) language. Sorry for that.
to the point.
Try to improve: face anatomy (poor), leave dirty line style (no sale), choice a stronger color palette (now is not keeping viewer attention).
Acceptable things: body anatomy.
Good advices.
So first, i need change the style. From there, work on line, color and anatomy. Right?
how about to the composition?
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in need honest feedback (Started by TITAN MADRE September 03, 2013, 07:18:11 pmBoard: Graphics
Im not find any comment from deviant or fb or blog so i start to think is poor quality work. I don´t know.
A good or bad feedback help me a lot.
lthis pic looks like pro?
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 amBoard: Graphics
Spoiler, click to toggle visibilty
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 amBoard: Graphics
Spoiler, click to toggle visibilty
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 amBoard: Graphics
I will try to make another complete diferent thing next time
For those who want to suscribe to my facebook: http://www.facebook.com/cuerno.muerto
Sorry. not to friend request. just suscription.
Posted by TITAN MADRE
in VF1 AJ MACROSS CHIBI 3D MODEL (Started by TITAN MADRE March 28, 2013, 02:24:15 amBoard: Graphics
The animation for that reason is deleted until find any of those.
Spoiler, click to toggle visibilty
