Posted by Mineko C. Lucky
in Random Topic V9 (Started by c001357 May 25, 2014, 07:28:05 pm
Board: All That's Left
Board: All That's Left
a lot of people are making fun of the sex scene written by morrissey in his newest novelmorrissey's novel said:Eliza and Ezra rolled together into the one giggling snowball of full-figured copulation, screaming and shouting as they playfully bit and pulled at each other in a dangerous and clamorous rollercoaster coil of sexually violent rotation with Eliza's breasts barrel-rolled across Ezra's howling mouth and the pained frenzy of his bulbous salutation extenuating his excitement as it smacked its way into every muscle of Eliza's body except for the otherwise central zone.buddy you shouldve just written "Eliza and Ezra fucked for a while"
But that wouldn't be enticing or stimulating at all. The human mind requires extra details so it can fill up the rest with exciting lewdness.
On the other hand, every single character in a lemon comic/mango is a Captain Obvious. They'll say and describe precisely what they are doing.
P.S. I remember you more in the older avatar with this man chugging down a bottle of Unknownitis. How long was it since you ditched that?