DNZRX768 said, May 01, 2014, 03:28:01 am

Okay, a few issues:

- Some of your clsns need work. The ones for the Standing Light Punch, Standing Heavy Punch, and Standing Heavy Kick are a example of what I am talking about. In those moves, there are frames where the blue clsn boxes do not even cover the body. Please go through the entire character's .air file, look for frames where the blue clsns do not cover the body, and fix them.

- The commands also need work. I do not understand why some of them use strange input combos like F, DF, D or F, UF, U when the standard QCF and QCB could do the job just as nicely without much headache. And the F, UF, U input combo will not work. Please go through the command file and fix up the commands into something more reasonable.

- Overall, I feel that this character needs a lot of work to be done. In addition to the points above, I do think that the character would need more time and refinement to be a worthy addition to any team. At the very least, get some hypers into the character. Hypers really adds a lot of personality to the character. Also, please play-test your characters frequently, for if you do, then most of these problems will not happen, especially on the commands.

Consider this as a learning experience on what many people here expect out of a character.

and actually... F, DF, D  is Forward Quarter Circle Down and F, UF, U is Forward Quarter Circle Up.