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Started by evilpeibol, September 08, 2014, 12:51:36 am
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[1.1] Comic Style
#1  September 08, 2014, 12:51:36 am
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You can view the character select screen, is only a concept. Be patient. Is not a formal Comic Style, only get the basic for start


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Last Edit: September 09, 2014, 04:20:51 pm by evilpeibol

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Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#2  September 08, 2014, 12:53:19 am
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evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#3  September 08, 2014, 12:58:21 am
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I have looked at the project section and I have not found the icon screenpack-hd, so I put it here. If the right thing is to be in the projects section I move from place.

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Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#4  September 08, 2014, 12:58:29 am
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I really like this a lot, but there's a couple of things that bug me about it. The top half of the screen is looking really nice and comic-book like. The bottom half, excluding the character stances, doesn't resemble the theme at all. The colors don't fit. They're too mellow. The lower fonts just don't work either because it's a basic hand-writing font. My point is there is a lack consistency among the various elements in your comp here. Keep the good work though. This has a lot of potential.

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Last Edit: September 08, 2014, 02:29:28 am by Алексей

evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#5  September 08, 2014, 01:00:59 am
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I'm blind in the future will not happen again. Thanks.

evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#6  September 08, 2014, 01:02:43 am
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Quizás quisiste decir: tomaré los consejos e intentaré mejorarlo
I'll take the advice and try and improve it

evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#7  September 08, 2014, 01:20:12 am
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It's true. Usually i use a google translator, the result is a disaster.
About Comic Style, i should change the name, i want improve the elements to select, about the another elements such as background I preferred to keep them in second place, in this case with less importance.
Anyway I think I'll keep the advice you bring me

Алексей

Re: [1.1] Pseudo Comic Style
#8  September 08, 2014, 02:31:00 am
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Thanks! I hope some others can provide some feedback for you too. It's always good to get a general response from the public. It kind of helps steer you in the right direction. :)

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evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Pseudo Comic Style
#9  September 08, 2014, 02:59:03 am
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Following the recommendations I have continued to make changes

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Re: [1.1] Pseudo Comic Style
#10  September 08, 2014, 05:04:37 am
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Wow, that looks already so much better. Keep it up, man. :)

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Re: [1.1] Pseudo Comic Style
#11  September 09, 2014, 11:17:05 am
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El "[?] WTF", me mata, nano xDDD. Si necesitas ayuda o cualquier cosa, tienes el Spanish Only también(aunque no es para poner wips ni eso...pero igual en materia de gráficos te pueden echar una manita. No olvides colocarlo dentro de un spoiler)

The "[?] WTF" is too much for me, buddy, xDDD.If you need help or else, you have the Spanish Only too(even it's not for showing wips or else...but maybe related to graphics someone could help you out. Don't forget to put it inside a spoiler)

evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Pseudo Comic Style
#12  September 09, 2014, 04:08:33 pm
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Image preview, It is a snapshot of the game. I created the fonts and use ryu char.

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Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#13  September 09, 2014, 04:59:31 pm
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Looks really good and the comic book idea is great, but all character portraits should keep similiar style.

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Adjust Brightness/Contrast and add same filter to make them look more alike.

evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#14  September 09, 2014, 08:56:38 pm
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All character portraits should keep similar style, it's true. Pictures are very good, that's the intention.

I'm slowly making changes, trying to make animations. I'm not convinced the result.
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Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#15  September 10, 2014, 04:59:57 pm
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New changes

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The background moves to scroll, the cursor to select character is animated. Bloody letters do not convince me, and you?

Алексей

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#16  September 10, 2014, 05:55:08 pm
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Looking really nice. I think the translucent names frames should be 100% opaque. It just fits the theme better. The Stage font is kind of unfitting, but you do have the blood splatter in the background that justifies it. My main problem is the cursor though. It looks kind of unnatural and doesn't fit with the theme. Maybe if it was Ghost Busters related it would fit, but that ectoplasmic goop is rather unfitting for this.

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evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#17  September 10, 2014, 08:01:03 pm
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The letters sure that are changed. The cursor really i like it, in green lantern comics or fantastic four appear some things like this. I'm thinking about the translucent container of names. If i use opaque containers it's more correct for the general aspect, but lose a little background image, it is on move with a scroll at left. In two case i like it. I'm stopped in the title letters on the character screen, i don't know how i will do it. I'm thinking in any program for 3d Letters or similar.
Last Edit: September 10, 2014, 08:10:49 pm by evilpeibol

evilpeibol

Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#18  September 10, 2014, 08:49:34 pm
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I like this more.
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Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#19  September 10, 2014, 10:04:08 pm
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Or this one
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Re: [1.1] Comic Style
#20  September 10, 2014, 11:31:43 pm
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If the names are actually going to go up above the big portraits where it says "Player 1" and "Player 2" then I would say get rid of the names under the small portraits. It's not very necessary for the names to be there twice IMO.

And I also think the cursor should be something that just outlines the character small portrait box, but if you want to stick with the green circle, that's all you. :)

Other than that, this looks pretty awesome.
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