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Started by Sir.Mocholini, December 19, 2008, 04:14:25 pm
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Sir.Mocholini

Australian Field
#1  December 19, 2008, 04:14:25 pm
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My first "2d style" stage.
It has lightning effects but those can not be seen in the preview pictures.
And the grass is animated.


super jump  ;)


Download: http://www.sendspace.com/file/3sttt2

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Re: Australian Field
#2  December 20, 2008, 02:36:34 pm
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Not bad...this is very different over the original SFA2 version, but I still like the original better...

Maybe more lightning would help?
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Re: Australian Field
#3  December 20, 2008, 07:21:03 pm
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- Speed the grass animation up.

- Back layers of grass do not extend fully to each side of the stage.  It.... looks odd.

- More layers of grass and clouds, going farther into the background.  Dull the colors as you go farther back.

- Lightning doesn't ALWAYS strike the ground, you know.  Vary your lightning effects a bit more.




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Sir.Mocholini

Re: Australian Field
#4  December 21, 2008, 12:00:33 am
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thanks for all sugestions.
i will start working on the version of the stage tomorrow kinda late for me now :sleeping: 

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Re: Australian Field
#5  December 21, 2008, 01:01:08 am
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Gelda Nebilim pretty much summed up what I was going to say.

Also, the original stage had rain, and I think it really needs some, as lightning without rain looks odd.

Finally, jumping so high over the clouds and seeing the moon just looks ... unrealistic ! o_O
I'd put the boundhigh lower, not being able to jump over the clouds. Still, make it so that we can see the nice Y-deltas you put on the clouds, they are well done. And put the moon at some other position if you want to keep, because it's quite nice.

PS : put your name in the readme, to promote yourself and so people remember who made the stage if they find it in a folder. ;)

Jellok

Re: Australian Field
#6  December 21, 2008, 01:12:58 am
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I thought this was a more fantasy version of the stage I like it though feels surreal.

Sir.Mocholini

Re: Australian Field
#7  December 21, 2008, 11:15:54 am
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I might remove the jumping over the clouds part.
But first i going to try changeing the deltas of the clouds.
So that it would take some incredible juggling (or an shinshoryuken) to se the full moon :sugoi:   
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