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Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style (Read 3426 times)

Started by BizarroToro, June 19, 2014, 04:17:38 am
Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#41  June 30, 2014, 03:53:25 am
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My thoughts.

I feel like the abdomen muscles need to be a bit wider from your most recent rendition.
I think his right arm muscles are a bit too bulbous and look larger than his left arm.
Finally, I feel the folds in his clothing don't match other Z2 characters. If you look at the other Z2 characters and the example Broly sprite endorsed by Balthazaar, the folds aren't quite as round and puffy as they are in your Broly's pants. I also feel like his red kilt's fold lines are a bit too long and heavy. It almost gives a plastic feel because it's so defined. Z2 folds seem to be a bit sharper yet less heavy than the clothing in your sprite.

I hope this makes sense. Sometimes when you're scrutinizing small details, it can be hard to describe.

Anyway, the sprite looks really great so far. There just seems to be a some more fixes that can be made to the muscles and clothing that could make the sprite mimic the Z2 style a little closer.
Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#42  November 14, 2014, 04:29:49 pm
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.....I think am more close of Z2 style..

Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#43  November 14, 2014, 04:48:56 pm
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I know Broly is all big arms, but I'm pretty sure his shoulder is not THAT bigger than his head.
Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#44  November 14, 2014, 04:53:28 pm
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Looks cool, do you got anims for him?

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Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#45  November 14, 2014, 05:29:36 pm
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.....I think am more close of Z2 style..
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There's some improvement, but you really should take a look at the corrections I made on the old edit - pose, arms, leg positions,etc...:
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Also for a stance Rugal's works really good (as also seen on Roken's magnificent Brolly)
--> Proof: http://youtu.be/JnPbMzYgHZE?t=2m7s

also a fast walk edit from SuperSonic Warriors with copy paste - yeah needs major work, especially head movement! I added two frames to the original 6, but it could be an easy base seeing how you could resize some movements from SuperSonic Warriors to 220% & then after that the legs to 110%

Last Edit: November 14, 2014, 06:25:07 pm by HQ
Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#46  November 14, 2014, 06:23:41 pm
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I'd go with a different pose tbh, for reasons I'd care not to say. :X


Also The pants and his robe still don't fit with the Z2 style imo.
Re: Broly Z2 Style Starting Drawing Style
#47  November 14, 2014, 08:04:42 pm
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@Balthazar could give you some insight....
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