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Started by Kaito Ubilla, December 24, 2012, 12:26:29 pm
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Kaito Ubilla

#Edit : MOTM Kazuya
#1  December 24, 2012, 12:26:29 pm
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Hi guys, this is my new pocket edition, I do not know, but I need more opinion about it. Is good or not? Where I need to improve? Please give your opinion.




Thank's a lot, salu2!
Last Edit: December 24, 2012, 12:32:21 pm by kaito-kun

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#2  December 24, 2012, 09:08:45 pm
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It looks very good but...
Kazuya smiling?First time ive seen him happy

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#3  January 05, 2013, 04:17:56 pm
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*Kazuya is smiling.. And legs looks long, also the brush used for line is inconsistent*

Nevermind the previous comment, its just the scale, the small sprite is okay.
Last Edit: January 05, 2013, 04:24:50 pm by brightview

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#4  January 05, 2013, 04:54:37 pm
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Erroratu said, December 24, 2012, 09:08:45 pm
It looks very good but...
Kazuya smiling?First time ive seen him happy
:nicepost:

one of his arms looks skinny compared to the other, otherwise it's alright. kazuya rarely smiles so it's not very fitting.

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#5  January 05, 2013, 05:45:17 pm
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#6  January 11, 2013, 04:23:22 am
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Thanks all for comments.
Well, I had the idea to put a sarcastic smile on it. But most see a smile of happiness...
In that case I'll leave it more seriously, let's see how it looks.


Salu2!
     Posted: January 11, 2013, 04:30:44 am
Titiln said, January 05, 2013, 04:54:37 pm
Erroratu said, December 24, 2012, 09:08:45 pm
It looks very good but...
Kazuya smiling?First time ive seen him happy
:nicepost:

one of his arms looks skinny compared to the other, otherwise it's alright. kazuya rarely smiles so it's not very fitting.

I'll try to make the two arms of the same width, so maybe get that sense of a being thinner than the other.
Thanks for the comment.
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