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Started by Kaze Masamune, March 31, 2009, 07:17:30 pm
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Kaze Masamune

Maka Albarn sprite
#1  March 31, 2009, 07:17:30 pm
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I dunno if anyone remembers me. Posted a sonic sprite forever and a year ago...there was mini-drama (like...real mini). I showed up a little while ago (like...3/4 of a year) and asked some other stupid question...

Bah it doesn't matter. I've gotten back into spriting and I'm trying my hand at humans now. Here's Maka Albarn from Soul Eater



Critique the hell out of it...feel free to fix and tell me what you did...especially with the hands and shoes. Thanks guys.

EDIT:



I made changes as suggested by a couple people here and elsewhere. How is it now?

inb4 april fool's jokes. Haven't been in the mood for those in 10 years.
Last Edit: April 02, 2009, 12:08:42 am by Kaze Masamune

Laxxe23

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#2  March 31, 2009, 07:19:06 pm
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how bout we tell you what to fix
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Kaze Masamune

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#3  March 31, 2009, 08:05:02 pm
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How bout that's what "critique" means. Don't try to be a smart alec.

Better yet, don't post at all if you don't plan to help. Howz about that?

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Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#4  March 31, 2009, 08:45:11 pm
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shading

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Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#5  March 31, 2009, 08:50:26 pm
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  • and the show goes on
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

Kaze Masamune

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#6  April 01, 2009, 04:21:03 am
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I figured as much. I've completely forgotten shading nuances I used to be well versed in. That is pretty much why the hands suck too. Any other comments?

Bastard Mami

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#7  April 01, 2009, 06:01:08 pm
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colors, which go along with shading I guess. though if you used flat shading you would still need to fix them.

Haseo80

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#8  April 01, 2009, 07:18:46 pm
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her skirt and cape are too short other than that what they said

Kaze Masamune

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#9  April 02, 2009, 12:09:26 am
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Made some changes. Please continue to tell me what to fix and how, if possible. thank you.

thoraxglycerin

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#10  April 02, 2009, 12:45:44 am
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for now it looks fine to me...
nice :guitarist:
made of ripped hearts waving far away,
only my memory stays still, as i say.
Looking to sky,
oh, how many people wished to fly?
i don't know,
beacuse life's harshness is a mainpart of god's show

Haseo80

Re: Maka Albarn sprite
#11  April 02, 2009, 10:23:56 pm
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shading mostly
some colors seem wierd
and the scithe needs a lot of work
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