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My best sprite yet :3 (Read 3194 times)

Started by Raiden, December 22, 2007, 06:26:02 pm
My best sprite yet :3
#1  December 22, 2007, 06:26:02 pm
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Wow this took forever to do and its 100% scratch




Point out flaws please :P
Re: My best sprite yet :3
#2  December 22, 2007, 06:32:14 pm
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100% scratch is a bad idea. even the most professional of professional artists use references.

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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#3  December 22, 2007, 06:37:38 pm
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The arm facing the screen looks too boxy and rectangular.

Only showing one side of his face looks wierd.
Try showing both eyes at the same time while he is facing forward.
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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#4  December 22, 2007, 06:38:20 pm
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Looks squished like Capcom sprites
Right arm (artist's left) has a strange bend in it.

100% scratch is a bad idea. even the most professional of professional artists use references.
I'd say something demeaning here, but I won't.
Last Edit: December 26, 2007, 04:50:59 pm by Picard

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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#5  December 22, 2007, 06:40:48 pm
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Seems to have a large abyssal area in between his mouth and his nose.
(He could have one hell of a moustache.)

His chin could be stronger I guess.


Also:
He could probably use a neck
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Last Edit: December 22, 2007, 10:30:31 pm by The Great and Powerful Oz
Re: My best sprite yet :3
#6  December 22, 2007, 08:11:54 pm
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100% scratch is a bad idea. even the most professional of professional artists use references.
You're wong ;) remember my Kunimitsu, Zafina and othe tekken sprites from scratch.


'Bout the sprite: that's OK, but I can see A LOT OF Sagat in it. If you say is 100% scratch, OK, but I'd say it's resized parts of him.

Re: My best sprite yet :3
#7  December 22, 2007, 10:28:22 pm
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'Bout the sprite: that's OK, but I can see A LOT OF Sagat in it. If you say is 100% scratch, OK, but I'd say it's resized parts of him.

I thought this too, but hey if the author says its from scratch then i'll believe them.

Erm who is this ment to be? Is it supposed to be anyone or is it a completely original character?

Either way, the points I would have made have already been made. The only thing I'd add to the comments is to add more detail/definition to the shorts, atm it looks like he's got a towel wrapped around his waist as if he just got out the shower.

Good luck  :sugoi:

I always shine!
Re: My best sprite yet :3
#8  December 23, 2007, 01:04:53 am
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currentlyi would suggest to use bases to get the anatomy right.
Re: My best sprite yet :3
#9  December 23, 2007, 05:23:29 pm
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well tbh i redrawn some of sagats parts to just make it look like a human.

would you say its fixed?


Last Edit: December 23, 2007, 05:56:33 pm by Raiden
Re: My best sprite yet :3
#10  December 23, 2007, 10:57:26 pm
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interesting sprite and specialy when it's done from scratch. There's some work to be done on it but you're getting there.

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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#11  December 24, 2007, 01:35:03 am
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hehe made me lol. But thanks for noticing :P i have fixed it.
Re: My best sprite yet :3
#12  December 24, 2007, 03:08:40 am
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Maybe it's lupus.


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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#13  December 24, 2007, 03:53:47 am
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You actually took my advise.
Good Job :thumbsup:

The only problem I have is still that one arm.
Good improvement though.
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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#14  December 28, 2007, 11:07:59 pm
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I think i have fixed it...


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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#15  December 29, 2007, 12:17:15 am
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That can't be healthy...
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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#16  December 29, 2007, 12:20:40 am
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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#17  December 29, 2007, 12:28:22 am
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No.
He has become something more.
Much more.
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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#18  December 29, 2007, 12:47:25 am
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Lol have a look at the thighs.... They are bigger than my belly. AND im obesed!



scary thing is he is not even flexing...

I would like to challenge him to a arm wrestle!



Last Edit: December 29, 2007, 12:51:22 am by Raiden

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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#19  December 29, 2007, 12:52:00 am
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He looks inflatable.

BTW:your sprite's good.
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Re: My best sprite yet :3
#20  December 29, 2007, 12:54:14 am
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