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New stance for Infinite's Cloud
#1  February 06, 2014, 04:49:37 am
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Hello again guys! Okay so if some of you are wondering why there hasn't been a lot of progress on my Link re-spriting, one of the reasons is because I've been a little more focused on this, at the moment. Doesn't mean I'm not going to finish Link, It's just that this is something that I figure shouldn't take too long. Now I absolutely love Infinite for completely taking the old Cloud char and completely revamping his gameplay to beautiful standards (no offense to the original creator). Sure, his sprites aren't the greatest, but with practically all the specials from just about every title he's been in, and great diverse combo's to destroy your enemy, he's just about the Cloud I've always wanted for Mugen. However there's been one slight thing that's been utterly bugging me with every match I play with him, and as you can obviously tell from the title, it's his stance. Now normally I'm alright for this kind of thing and don't get too worried about it, but I find Cloud's stance to be rather iconic in the FF7 franchise. So I took it upon myself to try and handle this little pet peeve of mine and as a bonus, maybe upload it for downloading, for others if they feel the same. Here's how it's looking so far.
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I'm kinda iffy about the shading on the right arm.
 
Here's what I'm basing it on. The movement probably won't be exactly identical.



So uhh..yeah. Tell me what you guys think. :) 
     
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Last Edit: February 06, 2014, 05:51:31 am by SuperGohanSunderland
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#2  February 06, 2014, 04:50:47 am
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Have his arm(right) bent a bit at the elbow. I think it would look a bit better.
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#3  February 06, 2014, 04:53:38 am
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Taybear took the words out of my mouth. Bend that arm at the elbow a little. It looks too rigid right now.

Good call in doing this, though. I hadn't even thought about it but it makes a lot of sense.
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#4  February 06, 2014, 07:03:26 am
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Okay how's the elbow on this? Tried to tilt it a bit. Also added more of the handle to his Buster Sword as well.
     
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#5  February 06, 2014, 07:24:06 am
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Arm still needs to bend more. Look at your ref and then the stance. Yours is much more straight.
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#6  February 06, 2014, 07:37:11 am
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I believe they are talking of Cloud's right arm. (Artist's left)
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#7  February 06, 2014, 07:43:34 am
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So wait..do you guys mean the left arm or right? I'm assuming it's the straighter one. :uhoh2:
     
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#8  February 06, 2014, 07:44:33 am
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Both arms in the ref are bent noticeably. The front arm in your stance is arrow straight.
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#9  February 06, 2014, 07:52:30 am
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Yeah, I see now. I'll try to bend it a bit, then.
     
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#10  February 07, 2014, 02:01:59 am
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So I'm having a bit of trouble figuring out whether I should try bending his arm, or go for the straight look. While the reference is straight from Final Fantasy 7, it seems to be slightly inconsistent with other games.
For example, here's his poses from Dissidia and Kingdom Hearts.


It seems to boil down to which stance just looks better.
The original, or the classic. :/
     
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Last Edit: February 07, 2014, 02:05:36 am by SuperGohanSunderland
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#11  February 07, 2014, 02:27:27 am
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I say you just go ahead and bend it, for the sake of the 2D style
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#12  February 07, 2014, 03:44:05 am
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The .gif you referred to earlier is the perfect reference.
Don't think too much into it.
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#13  February 07, 2014, 04:03:12 am
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Alright, I go ahead and follow the first gif then. So here's my attempt at bending the arm.
     
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#14  February 07, 2014, 04:09:55 am
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It looks quite good, but I feel that in the transition he lost some of the definition in his arm (being mostly noticed in the artists left) and perhaps thin them out slightly around the joint, it is looking quite good though.
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#15  February 07, 2014, 04:14:39 am
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So do you feel I should try and polish it, or should I move on to the others?
     
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#16  February 07, 2014, 04:17:00 am
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I would say tweak it a tiny bit if you can, the adjustment seems like it should be minor if anything, but I think it's useable in its' current state too. Hmm...maybe the angle of the arm could be a bit more also, the way I see it myself is that it seems difficult to replicate the straightness of the arm if you do try and do the pose yourself.
Last Edit: February 07, 2014, 04:20:16 am by C-G-U
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#17  February 07, 2014, 04:20:40 am
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you can bend the right arm (artist left) a little bit
but the arm looks fine
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#18  February 07, 2014, 04:35:19 am
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Alright so I tried doing a little clean-up like you said and here's how it looks.

Tried to even out the joints a bit and such. Really small stuff.
But I think I'll try and bend it a bit more. If I can't come up with anything, I'll just stick with this one.
     
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Last Edit: February 07, 2014, 04:42:46 am by SuperGohanSunderland
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#19  February 07, 2014, 05:08:04 am
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I like the iconic stance too, but won't that stance hinder some of his basic attacks n terms of animation?
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#20  February 07, 2014, 05:15:04 am
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This is something I've actually taken into account. What I plan on doing is basically just replacing the stance, and seeing how everything else goes from there. A rather unprofessional method, but that's my plan. If there ends up being too many disruptions, I'll call a quits for the mean time, and head back over to Link. For now though, I just want to see how far I can take it.
     
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#21  February 07, 2014, 05:19:49 am
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Thankfully, it looks like his sprites are already some-what jittery, and might proceed seamlessly. So adding in this stance might not end up too bad.
     
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#22  February 07, 2014, 05:37:29 am
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Okay so I added some of the details from his arm in the first pose onto this new one. I feel it's definitely a significant change.

     
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#23  February 07, 2014, 06:05:18 am
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The perspective looks wrong on the background arm now...

The foreground one's pretty good.
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#24  February 07, 2014, 06:28:09 am
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#25  February 07, 2014, 06:45:09 am
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Okee dokee! How's this?

 Also, should I leave the shoulder muscles on the background arm, or take that out too?
Small detail: The holes in the Buster Sword are now transparent.
     
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#26  February 07, 2014, 06:47:47 am
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I'd fix that big patch of darker shade on the background arm, try to keep the line in that one but add in some of the detail work of the previous one I commented on.

If that makes sense?

You're getting there.
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#27  February 07, 2014, 07:26:37 am
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Like this?
     
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#28  February 07, 2014, 08:11:20 am
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Here

I was trying to explain how to improve the shading on the interior muscle lines on the background arm, but it was easier for me to just do it.



I killed the transparency by accident but it should be easy enough to fix.
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#29  February 07, 2014, 10:56:32 pm
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Hmm, it's a slight detail but it helps a bunch. I see what you meant now. Nice job, and don't worry. The transparency's no biggie. Anyway, I'm going to go ahead and move on to the animation now. This is when it gets interesting..
     
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Last Edit: February 07, 2014, 11:05:48 pm by SuperGohanSunderland
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#30  February 08, 2014, 09:50:17 pm
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And I am just about done. Most of the animating was just replacing the arms of the old stance with the new one.

Original 

New
 Thinking about maybe changing up the speed or something.
     
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#31  February 08, 2014, 10:38:24 pm
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Looking pretty good, I may suggest maybe some slight movement on the lower legs and feet, as it feels like his top have is just gradually sinking into his knees and then lifting up again.
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#32  February 09, 2014, 07:56:25 am
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Maybe gve the new arms a little more tone...they are a little fatter then the original..but this stance looks great
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#33  February 09, 2014, 10:27:46 am
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Okay so I did some polishing, rearranging a lot of the misplaced colors on his pallet, and overall just giving the sprites a good clean up. So I think it's about time to release this. The nice part is that most of the sprites and animations ended up blending in pretty well with the stance, meaning minimal modification was required.

Looking pretty good, I may suggest maybe some slight movement on the lower legs and feet, as it feels like his top have is just gradually sinking into his knees and then lifting up again.

Sorry, but I'd rather not tweak anything with the feet or lower legs. I've kind of hit the point where I don't wanna mess up anything that's there. Plus, this is about how the original looks. But It turns out that in the last one I'd posted, I'd forgotten to implant a frame which happened to be where Cloud's legs went slightly more down. So I'm not sure if that will completely fix your problem, but I hope it helps. If you really feel it's that much of a problem though, I'll look into it. Thanks for the suggestion though.

Here's the polished one. Slightly sped it up too.


So now's the tricky part. I just got a MediaFire account and uploaded the character for everyone. Since this is my first upload, nobody get too surprised if the link doesn't work. :blank:
Tell me how it goes.
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/x06c44blebd18/Cloud

   
     
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Last Edit: February 09, 2014, 10:55:28 am by SuperGohanSunderland
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#34  February 09, 2014, 12:32:46 pm
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You should have zipped it, then uploaded.
In any case, the link works, no problem for that.

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#35  February 09, 2014, 03:34:25 pm
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It does look a bit smoother that way yeah, in the first one it looked a tad slow and too sudden, I think that'll work fine then.
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#36  February 09, 2014, 05:33:30 pm
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It works? Well that's good to know. And yeah, sorry about it not being in a zip folder. Still figuring stuff out on the site.
     
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