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Started by JNi, December 12, 2009, 10:44:51 pm
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New york Stage
#1  December 12, 2009, 10:44:51 pm
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Re: New york Stage
#2  December 13, 2009, 07:40:55 am
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That looks really..........ya know what? Let me play with it first.

5 minutes later........................
I love the way this thing looks and I love that it's original.
Ol' Lady Liberty was done very well and I love the grass.

There's a couple of things though.
Stagger the velocity of the birds so one is slower than the other and flies in at a different time.
Chop up the clouds up into three levels and have them move at different velocities. Also have them move a little slower.
Extend the grass a little more towards the water so it doesn't look like the benches are in the water....it looks like NYC is caught in an apocalyptic high-tide.

The airliner in the background (behind the buildings) looks weird cause it's too big and fully detailed where as the buildings are silhouetted. It also looks like it's flying within the city ala 911.
Maybe you can add some more floortension, but that's up to you.

Otherwise, be proud. You got some nice artistic talent.

JNi

Re: New york Stage
#3  December 13, 2009, 07:52:09 am
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Thanks for the comment and suggestions  :)

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Re: New york Stage
#4  December 13, 2009, 09:51:46 am
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would be fun if there are some boats passing by

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Re: New york Stage
#5  December 13, 2009, 08:04:30 pm
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