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Started by Flamekyo, July 11, 2009, 01:45:28 am
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Speed Vortex
#1  July 11, 2009, 01:45:28 am
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Re: Speed Vortex
#2  July 11, 2009, 02:27:27 am
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#3  July 11, 2009, 02:30:24 am
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  • Your background animation is fairly lossy and even in smaller resolutions is apparent.
  • The standard Particle Illusion lighting looks fairly tacky and could have used at least some adjustments before being put into your .sff
  • The fog is over bearing. There is way too much of it.
  • Some more time and care should have been put into the floor to try and avoid the awkward diamond shape when it repeats on either side.
  • Again your floortension and verticalfollow should be readjusted.
  • bgvolume should never exceed 255, any value after that is useless.
  • There is still more to point out, but I'll leave that to someone else.

You should really start investing more time into your stages. Right now it just seems like your throwing them together as quickly as you can and sacrificing quality.

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Do you really have to put that in every thread? Why not give him the link via PM and have him edit his initial post?
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#4  July 11, 2009, 02:31:07 am
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I dunno, guess it's via force of habit.
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#5  July 11, 2009, 02:45:17 am
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#6  July 11, 2009, 02:56:08 am
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  • Imagination is Everyting....
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  • Your background animation is fairly lossy and even in smaller resolutions is apparent.
  • The standard Particle Illusion lighting looks fairly tacky and could have used at least some adjustments before being put into your .sff
  • The fog is over bearing. There is way too much of it.
  • Some more time and care should have been put into the floor to try and avoid the awkward diamond shape when it repeats on either side.
  • Again your floortension and verticalfollow should be readjusted.
  • bgvolume should never exceed 255, any value after that is useless.
  • There is still more to point out, but I'll leave that to someone else.

You should really start investing more time into your stages. Right now it just seems like your throwing them together as quickly as you can and sacrificing quality.

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Do you really have to put that in every thread? Why not give him the link via PM and have him edit his initial post?

Thanks for pointing those things out. ill try to fix them and next time i will spend more time on my stages
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Re: Speed Vortex
#7  July 11, 2009, 04:23:58 am
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#8  July 11, 2009, 04:34:15 am
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Lol, what do you expect?  Anyway...most of the stuff I was going to point out has been pointed our already.
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Re: Speed Vortex
#9  July 11, 2009, 04:57:09 am
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I agree with Hank, you threw out too many retro-uberlike stages with some quality missing, but your stages seriously reminds me of ExShadow's early stages.
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#10  July 11, 2009, 05:29:41 am
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I don't know if its just me but I would change the bound right and left, or just get a different floor.  In this image here the floor clashes with itself.