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Summary of Arthur Millers, "On the Nature of Tragedy" (Read 477 times)

Started by 100_Sad_Pandas, April 25, 2013, 03:09:27 am
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Summary of Arthur Millers, "On the Nature of Tragedy"
#1  April 25, 2013, 03:09:27 am
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Could someone tell me what they think of this summary? It's for a school essay. I think the handout they gave us was a really dumbed down version of the article though.
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#2  April 26, 2013, 09:48:13 am
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Isn't a summary supposed to break up the summarized piece's time dimension? the number of "miller then restates" and "miller states" type phrases in your text give a feeling that you were summarizing linearly along the text, making it shorter piece by piece, and not actually summarizing the whole thing.

You are using a lot of commas at some points:
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To further go on about the subject of conflict, Miller says that the next conflict, higher than the last, is the conflict within two people, the combatants.

I'm also not sure about the length. 644 words seems rather long, considering you're (presumably) not even summarizing a book, but an article of a few pages. Since this is a school thing, what were your constraints?

No bigger issues with your spelling or grammar, although I didn't really pay attention to that. "an exalted", and "a human's long struggle"

Note that I read this while more or less actively looking for problems, so don't mind those points too much. I'm sure you could hand it in like that and it would be fine.
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#3  April 27, 2013, 12:34:48 am
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I had no constraints, he just told us to go for it. And i probably do have a problem with too many commas, it happens to me alot.

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