It needs some improvement. Mostly in the kick off.

To some extent, you could have done way more of it, as you've told people to pause, there is no reason to make each frame of text last so long. This feels like a question that could have been dodged if the 1st part described creating the state, and putting yourself into it. If you want to teach about changestates the .CMD should be the first place to start, as it does most of them.