All I can say about your sprite Karasai is that the shades are wobbly and they don't follow the shape of the object it's cast on, perceptually true for the ... wings? Also the floating crown thing at the top looks misshaped.
டுந்க்ற்க்ţ said, September 08, 2012, 02:02:21 ambased from Kiwi'sI'm stealing this palette for my Angel (which uses Dampir's sprites)
If I were drawing her as strait up Sailor Moon artwork then yeah she should be thinner still, but I making her fit within the proportions most common this CvS style.
Woah! People, those are some awesome works !!! Well done!- Chamat: Red's face is a bit...er...just add a bit of fiercy expression at it and it will be P-E-R-fect !!It's been time...and she went shopping:Have a nice day!!
Well, to be fair, there aren't any characters in the game who's design and style were meant to be skinny in the first place. That said I think that the overall look and proportions are fine, but the light source still looks to be coming from the front a little and the color choices are not great.Edit: If you are gonna adjust the thickness of his limbs and torso I wouldn't increase them by more than a pixel.
1. The hair is still lit from slightly in front2. Area is too dark to be lit from directly above3. The new shade doesn't look quite right to me. If you make the whole leg red you'll see the shade looks a bit off (imo) . You should probably leave it all shaded in except for at the foot or at best add a bit of light around the calf . Not saying that my attempt at sading is perfect either, but I think that's how one would normally shade a straight vertical leg in this style.Spoiler, click to toggle visibilty4. The "black" protions of his outfit could stand to be a bit blacker. Maybe you should try using colors from this Kyo palette.
These are too easy. Someone ought to commission CVSNB or someone to simply convert some KOFXIII characters for $40 each.
Drex said, September 20, 2012, 12:15:15 amThese are too easy. Someone ought to commission CVSNB or someone to simply convert some KOFXIII characters for $40 each.why not give it a try? :3