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Trying to be pro  (Read 2315 times)

Started by TITAN MADRE, September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pm
Trying to be pro
#1  September 27, 2014, 04:57:00 pm
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Hi. good enought to think this work was drawed for a pro?



As always need your usefull comment.
Re: Trying to be pro
#2  September 27, 2014, 04:58:36 pm
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Quality is definitely high on this one, Titan Madre. The inking looks really clean. Good work. Will you be coloring it?



Re: Trying to be pro
#3  September 27, 2014, 08:10:57 pm
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no coloring in this one Markpachi.

Some people said : "the draw is fine but is not amazing ....need something else"

What is that "something else"?

For example: yesterday I tried to use more energy in those lines:



and just recived silence.
Re: Trying to be pro
#4  September 27, 2014, 08:17:28 pm
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I think by something else, they mean more detail. I'm only saying this, because my line drawing isn't as good as my digital :-\. But I must say, your drawing is amazing, and your inking is even more! Keep it up! :)
Re: Trying to be pro
#5  September 27, 2014, 08:57:14 pm
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Try adding more details to the vest and the muscles. Also the image lack "action", is very static even if it's a fighting sequence.


Re: Trying to be pro
#6  September 27, 2014, 10:46:04 pm
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I see. More detail in general. Thanks.

one more question about style: I should keep a clean line (1st pic) or change to rough style like 2nd pic?
Re: Trying to be pro
#7  September 28, 2014, 06:54:19 am
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I think you should keep it clean.



Re: Trying to be pro
#8  September 29, 2014, 07:53:49 pm
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ok. thank you :)