The Pit 4 (I believe this one is actually hi-res =P)

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[The Pretty Boy]

Okay, after hours and hours and HOURS of learning how to put stages together properly, ive made about 20 stages, which i liked but they werent much XD but i think this one may be my best, but plz point out things SOFTLY, dont yell YOU SUCK!!! and stuff like that, im STILL trying to learn more about this  

http://www.sendspace.com/file/lmljxb



Help a guy out, if theres anything that needs improving, give me sum help plz!!!  

[Sol Knight X]

The characters don't look like they're standing on the floor. maybe raise the zoffset a bit if you leave it like that, but the sprites don't look too hires from the screen, but that could also be from the image itself, I'll test it and give better feedback.

[Orochi Gill]

That floor is way too small.

...and is that moon under the floor?

[GLB]

The Shadow's go from the bridge into the sky behind it meaning the Shadow scale should  be lowered.

 The bridge with Mario Karts delta should  be lowered and the sky behind the bridges Delta should be lower than the Mario Karts bridge,

the Mario Karts aren't really fitting the dark atmosphere and vibe of the stage either, what was that all about?

[jaffer-X]

good 1 but why is there another way behind the chars or should i say over there heads? (i'm not an expert in making stages too)

[The Pretty Boy]

The Shadow's go from the bridge into the sky behind it meaning the Shadow scale should  be lowered.

 The bridge with Mario Karts delta should  be lowered and the sky behind the bridges Delta should be lower than the Mario Karts bridge,

the Mario Karts aren't really fitting the dark atmosphere and vibe of the stage either, what was that all about?

Its suppose to be a parody of the pit series, not many of my stages will be all that serious, theres always sum sort of comic relief lol

[The Pretty Boy]

That floor is way too small.

...and is that moon under the floor?

Of course the floor is too small, its a parody of the mortal kombat pit stage =P

And about that moon... I was gunna put it OVER the stage.... but before i rly looked at it, i RLY didnt feel like remaking the stage after all that