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Started by LegatoSkyheart, April 07, 2008, 12:59:47 am
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Blue Dock
#1  April 07, 2008, 12:59:47 am
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Re: Blue Dock
#2  April 07, 2008, 01:11:19 am
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I, like it. But, there's something about the wooden floor that I dislike. I think it's that it's so pixelated when compared to the backdrop.
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#3  April 07, 2008, 01:13:04 am
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ya but this was my 1st stage so   ;D
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#4  April 07, 2008, 05:54:12 am
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Hmm.... It also looks familiar. Is that wooden platform taken from Kung Fu Man's temple stage?

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#5  April 07, 2008, 05:54:54 am
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The color loss on the BG is absurd. The sky and water are a single layer, and the color loss is a huge mess. You should split it up, and reconstruct it in the def file.

The dock is also pixellated, and shows evidence of upscaling.

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#6  April 07, 2008, 06:01:51 am
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ya I know that it's a single layer. I'll fix it when I learn more on the matter. I'm still new to stages. besides That's my first stage
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#7  April 07, 2008, 02:24:03 pm
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lets see :-\

1) the ground is wierd becuase the background is real life so it makes it a mess
maybe try to make planks that match the background planks

2) colour loss is very bad in the background it need to be split up if u want to avoid colour loss
and the dock is just as bad

3) single layer images thats the reason your stage has alot of colour loss
try breaking the images down a little

4) maybe make it animated if u know what im saying like by making the water movermake clouds move
or something its your choice

The stage is ok for a first stage
i hope you take my feedback and maybe fix this stage up before making others  ;D

   
Last Edit: April 07, 2008, 02:27:20 pm by ultimate goku
Re: Blue Dock
#8  April 07, 2008, 11:24:47 pm
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hmm. ..thanks ultimate goku! I'll keep that in mind when I get further in stage making. :)