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« Reply #260 on: November 06, 2009, 05:32:48 PM / November 06, 2009, 06:32:48 PM » |
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ok..I made a small adjustment on his legs since more than one person complained  lol I didn't really think there was much wrong with the legs, to me it looked like the arms weren't proportionally long enough like you said how's this?  |
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« Reply #261 on: November 06, 2009, 05:56:06 PM / November 06, 2009, 06:56:06 PM » |
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« Reply #262 on: November 06, 2009, 06:01:18 PM » |
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That running animation does look a bit better, but I was mostly referring to the one where he's got his hand on the sword handle. The elbow seemed out of place, the forearm to bicep length ratio didnt seem quite right. (The forearm looked longer than the upper arm region)
And those new Yourichi colors look better.
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« Reply #263 on: November 06, 2009, 06:18:11 PM / November 06, 2009, 07:18:11 PM » |
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That running animation does look a bit better, but I was mostly referring to the one where he's got his hand on the sword handle. The elbow seemed out of place, the forearm to bicep length ratio didnt seem quite right. (The forearm looked longer than the upper arm region)
And those new Yourichi colors look better.
oh yea...I was having a problem with that..I wasn't sure if it was just me...I guess I'll make it shorter...I figured that he's holding the handle at an angle...so it would appear that the bicep is shorter than normal. |
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« Reply #264 on: November 06, 2009, 06:58:50 PM » |
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I figured that he's holding the handle at an angle...so it would appear that the bicep is shorter than normal.
I was also thinking this is why I didnt mention it earlier. |
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« Reply #265 on: November 06, 2009, 09:33:16 PM / November 07, 2009, 12:33:16 PM » |
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new yoruichi looks much better but i still feel the hair is way out of place
the volume of the ponytail is an issue, and also the position of the beginning of the tying of her ponytail
it seems as if it has a stick that makes her hair sticks up in the air at an angle
disregarding the volume issue, the hair should be at least shifted down a bit to make it look natural
it somehow gives me the impression that her head is slightly elongated somewhat
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« Reply #266 on: November 06, 2009, 10:39:40 PM / November 06, 2009, 11:39:40 PM » |
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To me the hump in the ponytail seems a little to big and her eyes need to be closed a little bit like she squinting, other than that she looks good.
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« Reply #267 on: November 07, 2009, 02:35:58 AM / November 07, 2009, 03:35:58 AM » |
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@radar-tech and blah: I understand...so bring down the hump I'll fix that....and the eyes
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« Reply #268 on: November 07, 2009, 09:06:26 AM / November 07, 2009, 10:06:26 AM » |
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sasuke's run looks good, though i think there should be more movement in his sash.
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« Reply #269 on: November 08, 2009, 06:12:19 AM » |
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yoruichi's eyes are damn bad sorry mate
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« Reply #270 on: November 08, 2009, 03:42:09 PM / November 08, 2009, 04:42:09 PM » |
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yoruichi's eyes are damn bad sorry mate
no biggie, I'll fix  |
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« Reply #271 on: November 08, 2009, 11:30:28 PM / November 09, 2009, 12:30:28 AM » |
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« Reply #272 on: November 08, 2009, 11:31:47 PM / November 09, 2009, 12:31:47 AM » |
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Since Im already working on a Yoruichi of my own...Mind if I just code this one instead XD?
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« Reply #273 on: November 09, 2009, 12:04:55 AM / November 09, 2009, 03:04:55 PM » |
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nice animations! little comment jump animation - the frame when her leg about to extend, both her legs' white-boot (i know its not boot but...) seems out of shape...kinda like they got shortened...i think it just needs to have some depth? |
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« Reply #274 on: November 09, 2009, 01:27:23 AM / November 09, 2009, 02:27:23 AM » |
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nice animations! little comment jump animation - the frame when her leg about to extend, both her legs' white-boot (i know its not boot but...) seems out of shape...kinda like they got shortened...i think it just needs to have some depth? got it! |
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« Reply #275 on: November 09, 2009, 02:24:17 AM / November 09, 2009, 03:24:17 AM » |
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Since Im already working on a Yoruichi of my own...Mind if I just code this one instead XD?
lol ...I mean, sure but....isn't your Yoruichi for Team Storm Ex's project? wouldn't want to take you away from that  |
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« Reply #276 on: November 09, 2009, 03:23:27 PM / November 09, 2009, 04:23:27 PM » |
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Since Im already working on a Yoruichi of my own...Mind if I just code this one instead XD?
lol ...I mean, sure but....isn't your Yoruichi for Team Storm Ex's project? wouldn't want to take you away from that True  I still call coding Naruto! |
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« Reply #277 on: November 09, 2009, 06:23:57 PM / November 09, 2009, 07:23:57 PM » |
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Since Im already working on a Yoruichi of my own...Mind if I just code this one instead XD?
lol ...I mean, sure but....isn't your Yoruichi for Team Storm Ex's project? wouldn't want to take you away from that True I still call coding Naruto! how far are you with that Yoruichi? if your almost done then u could do this one too, cuz by the time we get enough sprites done to code, you could be done. |
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« Reply #278 on: November 09, 2009, 06:33:47 PM » |
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Sorry i've been such an ass! about coding your kakashi, i've just been busy with alot of other stuff..... I'm still going to get around to coding it for you.  |
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« Reply #279 on: November 09, 2009, 07:00:39 PM / November 09, 2009, 08:00:39 PM » |
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Sorry i've been such an ass! about coding your kakashi, i've just been busy with alot of other stuff..... I'm still going to get around to coding it for you. its ok...I had Arcoolguy start it for me...he's got the basic down....when u're ready for the advance stuff then u could probably take over, or u can code another character |
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