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Started by likiji123, December 08, 2014, 04:49:02 am
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#261  September 28, 2016, 01:05:19 pm
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I made this shock sprite of CVS Athena

Feedback would be extremely helpful :)

Nice work. But you did just a half of it.
I think, it's better to add SFA styled aura and alighty change hair's ongoing. C'mon, it's electricity, hairdo must change.
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#262  September 28, 2016, 10:31:40 pm
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Personally, I think before messing with the hair, the sprite itself needs touched up for the shock. That way, he has that part down, then can mess with that later. But that's my opinion heh. The yellow aura would be nice aye, though can always make it a secondary option (for instance, have this be like the SFIII styled shock, and then do the yellow aura for the first two sprites and there's your SFA/SFII shock~

EDIT - By the by, really love that Terra sprite. That looks amazing! o.o Can't wait to see how you do Aqua, though if you do her, will you be doing her in her armored form, or regular form? o.o?

Sora looks like he's really grumpy about something. Why the long face, Sora? Did someone steal your Riku again? : V But yeah, I think it's the way the face is shaped that's giving the problem?? Or maybe the mouth lines have to be shorter?? Hm...
Last Edit: September 28, 2016, 11:20:26 pm by Xenomic
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#263  September 29, 2016, 03:14:38 am
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I think, it's better to add SFA styled aura and alighty change hair's ongoing. C'mon, it's electricity, hairdo must change.
I was planning on doing the electricity aura when everything was final.
EDIT: some updates to the shock

By the by, really love that Terra sprite. That looks amazing! o.o Can't wait to see how you do Aqua, though if you do her, will you be doing her in her armored form, or regular form? o.o?

Sora looks like he's really grumpy about something. Why the long face, Sora? Did someone steal your Riku again? : V But yeah, I think it's the way the face is shaped that's giving the problem?? Or maybe the mouth lines have to be shorter?? Hm...
Thanks! :D, i wasnt actually planning on doing aqua anytime soon but now that you mention it, i might do it now. I'd probably do the armor form as i really like how they look

Heh, maybe one day ill be able to do good faces (maybe thats why i like spriting the keyblade armor more :sweatdrop: )

had another shot at it though, hopefully its better looking
Last Edit: September 29, 2016, 03:57:05 am by likiji123
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#264  September 29, 2016, 10:22:26 am
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Sora  sprite looks a bit messy. If you want to make it look better, try to keep your lines cleaner Likiji. Good outlines are a halfway to success.
Also, learn how to work with references.  Find sprites with similar elements of clothing, similar pose etc. and try to mimic  what you see. Keep up your work, you're getting better but there is still place to improve.
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#265  October 21, 2016, 07:04:25 am
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WIP of Primm from secret of mana in the CPS2 style

Is it looking good in terms of proportions?
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#266  October 21, 2016, 11:45:30 am
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Yes, it's looking good. :)

Stop copying and pasting people's words to make your post, malevka1.
Last Edit: October 21, 2016, 04:17:25 pm by AlexSin
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#267  October 21, 2016, 02:26:05 pm
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looking good :thumbsup:

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#268  October 22, 2016, 12:46:14 am
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NIIIIIIICE.

I really can't wait to see how it comes out! It's looking great so far!
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#269  October 22, 2016, 01:00:30 am
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#270  October 22, 2016, 01:25:53 am
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Move the head a pixel or two upwards, it looks like she has no neck at the moment.
It's not looking bad by the way. :)
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#271  October 22, 2016, 01:35:01 am
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#272  October 23, 2016, 03:39:24 am
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Another CPS2 sprite :)
this time its aqua.

Is it looking good with the proportions??
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#273  October 27, 2016, 05:59:30 pm
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Aqua's proportions are great atm. Dunno what else to say other than that, but I'll tell you this, I'm quite excited for it. :D

As for Purim, it does look better, but there are two problems I noticed: it looks more like CvS than CPS2, and what Sabockee said above about Sora:

Sora  sprite looks a bit messy. If you want to make it look better, try to keep your lines cleaner Likiji. Good outlines are a halfway to success.

but this also extends to the shading. I ended up doing this:



My rendition's on the right. See how the shading/outlines are a bit cleaner? In addition, see how the midtone is being used? It's actually the shadow color on parts closer to the screen/viewer's sight. The shadow colors and darkest tone are being used as outlines instead. For limbs farther, the midtone becomes the light shade, while the other two function as one would expect them to.

You did a good job nonetheless, and I encourage you to practice this style. Not a lot do, and once you get an idea of how things work, it becomes all too easy.

And remember, clean shading/outlines = professional looking sprite. :)
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#274  October 28, 2016, 08:21:24 am
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Ahhh, It seemed like something was off.
Thank you so much for the edit/ the tips, I will definitely think about them while doing aqua :)
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#275  October 29, 2016, 03:49:28 am
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Converted the Sonic 3 sprite into the Mania style
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#276  November 10, 2016, 01:23:33 pm
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My WIP for the Movie Scene Recreation Sprite Contest

Goku VS Piccolo (Z2 Style, kinda???) from DB, one of my favorite fight scenes in any media ever

Feedback would be very helpful :)
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#277  November 10, 2016, 01:43:33 pm
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#278  November 10, 2016, 03:03:08 pm
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My WIP for the Movie Scene Recreation Sprite Contest

Goku VS Piccolo (Z2 Style, kinda???) from DB, one of my favorite fight scenes in any media ever

Feedback would be very helpful :)

"10) Movies can include Cartoon Movies, Anime Movies, Real Life Movies, 3D Movies, etc... (a TV series is not a movie)" I think the rules state it's gotta be from a movie. Sprite work looks pretty dope so far though.
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#279  November 12, 2016, 04:38:31 am
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I think the rules state it's gotta be from a movie. Sprite work looks pretty dope so far though.
Oh........ Welp
Spoiler, click to toggle visibilty

And i made Ty in the Sonic 3 Style
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#280  November 15, 2016, 01:24:43 am
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Heres something i've been wanting to do for a while but i could really never get right, untill now ;)

Its CVS Jinpachi :D (i know theres no viewers right arm but im struggling with that :sick:)
is there anything that needs fixing before i continue??
Last Edit: November 15, 2016, 01:34:42 am by likiji123