The Mugen Fighters Guild - Freeza Z2 [Project]

galactus

Re: Freezer Z2

#161 June 28, 2012, 07:33:40 pm

I would like to second that, love how he's turning out though personally, (especially love that Energy/Death ball animation, looks like he's about to blow everything up lol

) your doing well டுந்க்ற்க்ţ good luck with him..

and cant wait to see the finished version of him personallly 8)

F. James Fernandez

Re: Freezer Z2

#162 June 28, 2012, 08:51:52 pm

I'm a empty vessel seeking to be filled.

Looking really nice here

just one issue I have... He shouldnt be running IMO

You can have that walking animation you did (I think its walking) where he is gliding. I dont ever remember Freeza running. From what I remember I think Metal Cooler was the only one I saw running but that was so long ago. Also if you are going to have him run that tail needs to go up and down. like the dancing movement style of waving your arm.

Also I just noticed. That big Earth destroyer is held up with his index finger not the palms of his hand.

Last Edit: June 28, 2012, 09:21:57 pm by F. James Fernandez

Iced

Re: Freezer Z2

#163 June 28, 2012, 11:08:26 pm

日本は素晴らしい国です。

F. James Fernandez said, June 28, 2012, 08:51:52 pm

Looking really nice here just one issue I have... He shouldnt be running IMO

You can have that walking animation you did (I think its walking) where he is gliding. I dont ever remember Freeza running. From what I remember I think Metal Cooler was the only one I saw running but that was so long ago. Also if you are going to have him run that tail needs to go up and down. like the dancing movement style of waving your arm.

Also I just noticed. That big Earth destroyer is held up with his index finger not the palms of his hand.

That run is completely in char, down to the crossed arms.
his death ball is using his index, the super nova was a different move.

some of those sprites seem to have gained thick legs again, he looks kindof bloated on those.

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Last Edit: June 28, 2012, 11:13:43 pm by Iced

F. James Fernandez

Re: Freezer Z2

#164 June 28, 2012, 11:36:04 pm

I'm a empty vessel seeking to be filled.

Agreed. Some frames look bigger than others or the tail is longer than others. I know its a pain trust me. I know there are a few animations on Mel that are either a little big or small. but it just teaches you for future projects.

Dcat

Re: Freezer Z2

#165 June 29, 2012, 01:17:52 am

Your Channel 6 News Anchor is in another Castle!

F. James Fernandez said, June 28, 2012, 08:51:52 pm

Also if you are going to have him run that tail needs to go up and down. like the dancing movement style of waving your arm.

I disagree, it's not a flag or clothing. His tail is a massive and powerful, appendage, it shouldn't flap in the wind like what you're describing. I like how the tail is now, reminds me of a velociraptor's movement and how it's used for counterbalance when they run. This animation seems perfect to me.

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F. James Fernandez

Re: Freezer Z2

#166 June 29, 2012, 01:39:30 am

I'm a empty vessel seeking to be filled.

That tail is way too stiff IMO. Im not saying to make it move like water. Even Dogs and Cats tails move a bit more when they run. So when he flies forward his tail shouldnt move at all because its tail is mighty strong and has a mind of its own $:-\$

so it moves here but doesnt move when its running. makes perfect sense

Now if the tail doesnt move ill just take it as Freeza's a dinosaur

F. James Fernandez

Re: Freezer Z2

#167 June 29, 2012, 02:10:35 am

I'm a empty vessel seeking to be filled.

Even that looks wrong to me but I know what you are saying. It was just a thought to look over it. Nothing I say should change your imagination on the animation. Overall I just dont see him running period but thats just me like i said. Its not that I didnt get what you were doing I was just saying to give the tail a little more movement not to make it just like the air dash.

I was thinking about something like this. If i had more time I would had made it move better.

Tail movement I just did is a little big. Smaller waves would be best.

Last Edit: June 29, 2012, 02:31:59 am by F. James Fernandez

Dcat

Re: Freezer Z2

#168 July 02, 2012, 07:40:38 am

Your Channel 6 News Anchor is in another Castle!

Really glad that you're sticking to your guns and not changing it, Chamat. A billowy tail would just look wrong.

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Re: Freezer Z2

#169 July 04, 2012, 02:56:11 am

you should just make your own thread in graphics

F. James Fernandez

Re: Freezer Z2

#170 July 04, 2012, 05:56:09 am

I'm a empty vessel seeking to be filled.

Dcat said, July 02, 2012, 07:40:38 am

Really glad that you're sticking to your guns and not changing it, Chamat. A billowy tail would just look wrong.

Sticking to it or not it really doesnt make a difference to me. its not my character. its just to give my opinion on things rather then the same old comments "looks good" "great job" "keep up the good work" which doesnt add anything to the creativity. Its your project so do as you wish.

Long John Killer

Re: Freezer Z2

#171 October 08, 2012, 09:57:36 am

Proper order of things is often a mystery to me

டுந்க்ற்க்ţ said, October 08, 2012, 09:27:49 am

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I must go, my Planet Trade Organization need me

Fixed.

I love the getting up animation that he uses his tail to push himself back up. Was it based off any animation from a previous DBZ game, or scene from the manga/anime? I don't remember personally, but it fits well.

Cybaster

Re: Freezer Z2

#172 October 08, 2012, 04:02:07 pm

Limited time to use Infinite power !

So you're finally getting to the boring stuff ? Good luck with that.

Daeron

Re: Freezer Z2

#173 October 08, 2012, 04:22:37 pm

Whats a girlfriend? its something you can eat?

Great Job, the get hits are boring to do i know, but its looking very good.
Btw, i find the tail a bit long in the crounched frame

Noside

Re: Freezer Z2

#174 October 08, 2012, 06:15:56 pm

NINJA COP SAIZOU

Looking good Chamat, i'm definitely following this.

GTOAkira

Re: Freezer Z2

#175 October 08, 2012, 07:02:04 pm

The Sweeper
Surpass my Aniki

nice man good luck

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Re: Freezer Z2

#176 October 08, 2012, 09:11:25 pm

I see you.

awesome dude nice to see you are back with updates.

Cybaster said, May 21, 2013, 04:37:37 pm

You'll fix chuchoryu ? Sounds like a plan. How about you code him from scratch instead ?

Karasai

Re: Freezer Z2

#177 October 08, 2012, 10:17:35 pm

The tail seems to get longer.

Cazaki

Re: Freezer Z2

#178 October 09, 2012, 01:19:21 am

The sweep lacks impact, maybe if the tail whipped around more it would look better, plus Frieza himself is barely even turns around, doesn't seem powerful enough. In the tail attack his other arm disappears entirely, I know that your trying to convey his body covering it up but it doesn't quite work.

Dope

Re: Freezer Z2

#179 October 09, 2012, 02:35:08 am

^That's a crouching turn, not a sweep attack.

Karasai

Re: Freezer Z2

#180 October 09, 2012, 02:51:40 am

Also King Cold has the wrong color scheme

Here's a good reference image

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