Standing b can't be comboed into (maybe intentional, I dunno).

The windup animation of  Severence Pay looks a little weird. Maybe if he did his back dash instead of that slide it would look better?

Guard Cancel attack (costs a stock). If you roll, opponent throws. Fact. A guard cancel attack (nothing fancy, maybe something similar to the blowback attacks from KOF) would help when your on the defence.

Command Throw. Big guys like this usually have command throws. In Kakuge Yaro, I remember some sort of hammerthrow like move.

- Super BG still overlaps.

- Why can I cancel his lv. 2 super into his lv. 1 super?

- For a guy who can't jump, he sure has a lot of gravity defying moves!

- That burning punch super he has could afford to have some edits to have him running or at least like he's flying at the opponent instead of sliding on the ground. As it is, it looks pretty lazy. Ditto for the backslide, as it doesn't look organic at all, and probably could do without.

- Jackhammer is... well, I can't really say much about it. It just doesn't look well-planned out.

- Sound volume and quality varies too greatly, consistency would be good here. Consider using Soundforge's Wave Hammer + Amplify.

- Win music just cuts off too abruptly. At least find the ending to that song or fade out or something.

- No Hitspark for that projectile. Looks awkward.

Also haha, I got a shout-out in the readmes, making this the second readme that I've been accused of "bitching" (the first being Claude Speed's screenpack's readme).

Blame John Belushi.

I'm fine with the bitchslap being as is.

It was actually.

There is no ending or fadeout: It's Raptor's wintheme from NW, and thus ends like that.

• (Ahm, I stumbled over a few passages of his storyline, some of them might be just me:)
• "At an early age he showed signs of his already great appetite"
• "As he grew older, and was thus pretty large"
• "Misty was initially a waitress at the club Hashimoto worked at, only to have a vicious spat with the manager, her now-ex, and
  subsequently fired."
• "Quickly recovering, he dashed hom"
• "a wreslter."
• UB + (y) results in throw instead of the expected leap attack from close up.
• that leads me to: throw(s) doesn't appear to be listed in the readme?
• he can throw from running! oi
• hitsparks placement!? (i thought the char was done)
• no hitspark for Paint Sprayer looks odd [agreed with Jango]
• Wrecking Ball--his "basic anti-air crap"--is ironically one of his moves that can be air-blocked. XD
• I can understand Wrecking Ball and Paint Sprayer (both are in the air, so they can be air-guarded)--but why Bulldozer as well?
• Training Mode versus KFM-dummy set to jump and mash x: corner KFM, hold F and keep hitting (y). Around 13 to 15 hits KFM has no chance of avoiding, approximately 98% damage.
• Drop Kick and (z) act strange after passing through p2 with the dash:
  
  • Drop Kick jumps off in the direction opposite to the one you were running in.
  • (z) makes you grab The Nothing.
• 16 Tons is a bit boring to watch. High/low hit alterations for p2 during the running part, and more of a BAM effect after landing?
• Union Dues seems even blander. Shake it! Explods! Effects! Graphics! ^_^"
• Freight Train = erm, ... unexpected??? Hmmmmm, have you considered random movements and speed variations for the "ghosts?" More chaos~
• You probably know about WARNINGS in state 3150, the aura helper: Has no target with hit id et cetera.
• Is editing the win music out of the question? It sounds abruptly cut-off at the end. [written after reading Jango's first post about it.]

# You probably know about WARNINGS in state 3150, the aura helper: Has no target with hit id et cetera.