Zemilia said, April 25, 2016, 12:37:26 amMight be perspective play, but her left eye (perspective left) looks like it's squinting.Nope, you are right. Fixed it.
Sin- said, April 25, 2016, 01:29:34 amHer right hand (viewer's left) has six fingers.Fixed. Any other visible mistake I might have missed?
Demitri said, April 25, 2016, 02:47:26 amWhat's going on with the kneesNot sure what you mean. Is there something wrong with them?I tried to make them as close as possible to Mami's original sprite:
If I was at home, it'd point it out and explain better, but it's... different..even looking at the source sprite. I think the shading contributes to it. The knee looks kinda far down on (her) left leg. The right one is hard to distinguish.Use your own leg and hopefully you'll get what I'm saying. I'll gladly explain better in a few hours once I'm home.
First DBFC sprite, and it's a complete disaster, ahahaha.I see what you mean by the shading, I also realized that one part of the shading looks higher than another. I'll look at another source sprite and fix accordingly.EDIT: I tried it again, comparing it to Kirino. How do they look now?
Worse, they don't even look like knees. The left knee (viewer's right) was right before, you just had to move it higher like Demitri said; and the right knee (viewer's left)... what is that?The ear is too far from the head and the face's shading is wrong.
How is the face shading wrong, when literally all the faces are shaded like that? Or at least Asuna's face.I'll give the knees another look when I get home.
Alex (Sin again eh?) covered it pretty much. The calves are kinda off too if i didnt mention that last time. Like, they arent badly drawn at all, however given the angle and whatnot, its wrong (again use own legs for ref or google 'bent knee' to see photos that will show it). Once you fix the knee thing, i think fixing that will be easy.
while its a good first attempt as a whole it just looks very awkward.the arms are really detailed while the abs and the rest of her anatomy just looks flat, the face shape is weird too, it feels "sharp and small" if ya get my drift, the nose shouldn't be like that either.it looks decent and its your first DBFC styled sprite so it's not that bad, but as a whole it still looks awkward in general, especially in the anatomy section.
I guess I can fix most of it by actually adding some semblance of detail to her physique (Mami did tell me he wanted her to be a bit muscular); for that to happen, I have to fix up the legs first before anything. Can't say I agree with you on her face though.Finished the artwork models for Yamato, Bilstein, and Lilith, will work on em once I sort out the first request.while I'm here, @NamelessOnlinePlayer: I was fishing around for some Arkham Knight concept art because I forgot how he actually looked like, but I'm afraid that I'm going to have to ask you to change the character to one with a less impossible design, because I'm completely incapable of bringing a design like his into CPS3 style, there's just too much detail going on. Really sorry to have to inconvenience you with this.
Zaitsu Hatter said, April 26, 2016, 03:17:41 amwhile I'm here, @NamelessOnlinePlayer: I was fishing around for some Arkham Knight concept art because I forgot how he actually looked like, but I'm afraid that I'm going to have to ask you to change the character to one with a less impossible design, because I'm completely incapable of bringing a design like his into CPS3 style, there's just too much detail going on. Really sorry to have to inconvenience you with this.It's OK. This is gonna be awkward to say, but I'll change my request from Arkham Knight to Hilbert from Pokémon Black & White (It's weird, I know, but I couldn't come up with a better idea).Here's an image of him:Spoiler, click to toggle visibiltyI hope what I'm choosing now is something feasible.
Excuse the late reply, and yes, Hilbert's design is more feasible than the Arkham Knight, thank you for understanding. I'll add him right now. added.
ZZZZZZZZSpoiler, click to toggle visibiltyWhile I'm at it, here's what I'll be streaming tomorrow morning:-Yamato Nadeshiko (City_Hunter's request)-Capcom vs Square Enix small logo2 hour stream if my back doesn't pain me, but I'll probably be taking a 30 min break in between to actually go and stretch.Hope you can make it, if possible.
City_Hunter said, May 03, 2016, 01:28:18 pmGood luck with Nadeshikoreally liking the progress so farI'm going to be re redoing it, it's more of a mess than you think.And first stream is happening: https://picarto.tv/ZaitsuHatterSince I overslept, it's gonna be an hour long, so only Nadeshiko will be done.EDIT: Livestream is done, thanks @ゴーストキラー: for coming and feedbacking!
