I feel that her facial structure feels slightly inaccurate. I'd move her facial features to be a little closer while increasing her eyes slightly (like Athena's eyes), that way it'd be a little closer to how young she often looks like.Actually, I just did that, along other little fixes.
out of all three, I think mine (on the left) is the least accurate, as I was making her, I could't get her to look young enough with out making her look like she was Bao's age or something.tough choice though, NiO's (on the right) looks good but I think she looks more like she is 13 or 14 years old.I like MotorRoach's (middle) the best cause her face is a little longer and seems like she is the right age.thanks for helping me guys, I'm really glad that we got another one done and it looks good.Also thanks for the complement Walt
btw guys , is there a problem if i mash everything together in a big ass image ? ( imean everones portraits so far )
Phenomenal work. Karate's a home run. Pai's kick ass and Xiangfei is spot on. Raiden's a great starting point. Can't wait to see how he develops. Just fantastic stuff.
NGeo said, October 28, 2015, 08:41:08 ambtw guys , is there a problem if i mash everything together in a big ass image ? ( imean everones portraits so far )I'm cool with that, i'll even modify the first post and add it to a spoiler.
really could use some some pointers on doing his back and neck, there are not that many references for how it should be done... any suggestions?
no feed back on what I should do with Raiden?meh, I made Dhalsim though what do you think?I also edited my old Goenitzyou know, for a cheap, smug asshole that just snaps his fingers for op attacks, he's kind of a cool character really.Finished Juri too
Ok for Raiden, he's looking a lot better. The shoulder strap should be a bit thicker (maybe 2.5x) and should start to connect to the other (offscreen) shoulder strap towards the bottom.The left side of Dhalsim's mouth is stretched out a bit too far.Goenitz looks awesome.I like the way Juri came out.
I'll be honest, I was never good with detailing the back of a character, but Raiden does seems like he could use some details in there. The only thing I have in mind as a reference is this artwork.Dhlasim looks pretty good, but his jaw shape looks way too square like and kind of big looking in general, which isn't really accurate to Dhalsim's design. Another thing that is off are his lips, as they seem a little bigger than they usually are. Here's some reference to help:
Melcore said, October 30, 2015, 08:41:13 am[Goenitz] for a cheap, smug asshole that just snaps his fingers for op attacks, he's kind of a cool character really.Agreed. One of my favorite characters actually.
okay, I think I fixed the back but then I realized that he was not really centered so I am posting both, which do you guys think is better, more centered or less?also I think I fixed Dhalsim, here is the progression
Hello there, you're doing some really good stuff here, but I'd rework heavily that Raiden. He does need anatomical details since it's so posed, and like this he even looks kind of womanly. Check Snk Yamazaki, imagine that on the back: that big trapezius alone would cover part of his face. Now Raiden, he's taller and bigger than that, a real giant, and he's sort of hunched there. Actually check this:
Guillotine said, October 31, 2015, 12:24:15 pmHello there, you're doing some really good stuff here, but I'd rework heavily that Raiden. He does need anatomical details since it's so posed, and like this he even looks kind of womanly. Check Snk Yamazaki, imagine that on the back: that big trapezius alone would cover part of his face. Now Raiden, he's taller and bigger than that, a real giant, and he's sort of hunched there. Actually check this:you know man, you were right. thanks for the great feedback, I went back and completely deleted his back and neck... then drew it from scratch, I think he turned out much better then my previous attempts. here is the progression so you can compare the changes made. special thanks to NiO for creating the initial portrait and thanks to Swiper for suggesting a different one and for uploading the newest addition because I'm at work and could not do that right now, would had to wait until got home.
