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M.U.G.E.N Central => Your Releases, older Mugen => Topic started by: Dc414 on July 07, 2008, 07:35:22 AM

Title: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Dc414 on July 07, 2008, 07:35:22 AM
(http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d2/dc414/wallsup.png)

my first stage. i am working on color loss for a better high rez view.

*updated* i have made all the corrections mentioned below, no need to rename file anymore thanks again.

[http://www.esnips.com/doc/dca11ce1-19d2-480b-9183-281a9060fce1/walls (http://www.esnips.com/doc/dca11ce1-19d2-480b-9183-281a9060fce1/walls)
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: [(_sourlucas_)]> on July 07, 2008, 07:40:30 AM
Not bad, man. You always create genius material, but never follow through a lot, but this one looks pretty good by the look of the screenshot
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Dc414 on July 07, 2008, 08:00:51 AM
yea i know thats my big problem. but this stage is actually a small part of my bigger project. :)
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: MOTVN on July 07, 2008, 09:49:32 AM
definitely feelin' the style

even in the future they cant stop the element of hip hop lol

graffiti ftw


- you need to rename the .def file to The_Walls or your stage can only be read in extrastages

- pal.default code has no reason to be in there, that code is for character def files

- you have the deltas set at 2,2 which means the background is closer to the camera than the characters,
  make it 1,1 considering your stage is just one giant image split into four parts,
  that will keep the floor on the same plane as the fighters

- p1startx and p2startx should go back to -70 and 70, or you are messing up character interactive intros

- no need for bgm.loop code it's useless


keep up the good work
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Tylerday08 on July 07, 2008, 10:24:51 AM
Yeah this stage looks great so far man. keep up the great work.
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Aadmi on July 07, 2008, 10:36:03 AM
I love the way this stage looks, and the Colr is Good to me, if you make stages like this as your first no doubt you'll be the best of them out there :sugoi:



Cheers,RajaBoy
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: ☺FenixAzul☺ on July 07, 2008, 11:16:24 PM
Nice  8) u could try adding some animation but the stage is awesome BTW
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: MirageAtoli on July 08, 2008, 05:53:35 AM
Where is the hexagonal floor from?
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: RoboShinKen/Vash on July 08, 2008, 09:20:20 AM
Oh Wow ... Great Release I Must Say This Stage Looks Great :sugoi:
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Average Mugen Guild Poster on July 08, 2008, 12:00:35 PM
Dude, this cannot be your first! :D
More like your tenth. :ninja:
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: fer619 on July 08, 2008, 06:36:58 PM
wow, this stage looks pretty good.
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: IEatRamen on July 08, 2008, 10:11:53 PM
what did you make the sprites on?
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Dc414 on July 08, 2008, 10:44:44 PM
most of it was done in illustrator and photoshop then pieced togeather
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: IEatRamen on July 08, 2008, 11:27:08 PM
oh, okay
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Ninja Penguin on July 10, 2008, 09:35:20 PM
Excellent job, I can't wait too see more of your stuff.
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: JYD on July 10, 2008, 11:41:05 PM
Awesome Stage Bro...& Thanks For Letting Me ost It

Hurry & Make More :sugoi:
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: kamuiness on July 12, 2008, 08:50:01 PM
if u add some animation, it'd be one of the best hi-res stages so far
for sure i'd keep this stages in my mugen
hope more stages like this one
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: Dc414 on July 12, 2008, 11:55:57 PM
thanks for the awesome words guys i will be attempting some animation . keep an eye out for a re release  any ideas for some animation. ?
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: IEatRamen on July 13, 2008, 05:41:20 AM
for the background metal plates, in its cracks, you should add like, a dark blue liquid, or electricity pulsing up from the floor's cracks
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: xhva on July 13, 2008, 11:05:26 PM
Beautiful stage -- I love the art style. Definitely not the usual "first release" :)

Only one thing I noticed: the deltas on a high-res stage should be 2,2 or else characters "slide" on the floor. I think that's how you had it originally.

Parallax would look great here to distance the background wall from the floor/ceiling, but leave that until you're really comfortable making stages. Maybe Ziltama will reappear with a nice parallax tutorial link (I can only find VIB's, which is a bit hard to get into: http://www.geocities.com/vibhp/mugen/tuto/parallax.html )

Looking forward to more from you. :)
Title: Re: "The Walls" my first stage.
Post by: kamuiness on July 16, 2008, 09:34:24 PM
right now i have any adeas to animation in this stage, maybe this is stage's awesome without any animation, but i hope the next stage'd has animation(of course, with the same quality of this one)