Devil Jedah

[deathkilla]

 hello I introduce you a plan in which I yours many it is my devil jedah (jedah edit)
figure that I have edit of jedah made by deuce at the moment I cannot release it because deuce say me on msn I'd prefer that you not release any edits you make.
and I also need the approval of 586
because I have took back sounds and sprite of this dark arcueid

pics :http://senri-mugen.xooit.fr/t78-devil-jedah-mon-wip.htm#p238

[Basara Bogard]

I have edit of jedah made by deuce at the moment I cannot release it because deuce say me on msn I'd prefer that you not release any edits you make.

So... why do you post this then, if you can't release that Jedah edit??

[Kensuke]

Isn't that kind of redundant? Devil Jedah?

I mean he is the Vampire Savior so that pretty much already states that.

On to your wip.

Personally I like Duece's Jedah. A lot. That said, It's a very good conversion keeping it's style and it's ai intact.

Jedah has always been a very tough opponent with the tools given to him. So he doesn't need to be toughened up at all.

From your pics it doesn't look like this would be a very good edit.  I'm not trying to discourage you so follow what I say.

What seems good and what doesnt.

NO 1. Purple lightning. NO. Doesn't fit the bill for Jedah or his powers. He simply has nothing to do with lightning.

MAYBE 2. The Warakia (sp?) blood effects, are interesting. They would keep the same flavor of Jedah but still seem a bit out of place.

NO 3. The bloody looking burst thingys. NO. Maybe if there was an explanation, but most likely this will not be good. If you explain opinons may change.

NO 4. The laser effect that comes from sions last arc. NO.  Jedah has no reason at all to have a random laser coming from his abdomen. Albeit a bloody one, it still has no place.

What?!?!? 5. The bloody cross that looks like its from the attack totenkruz from disgaea. I realize this was also in Evangalieon (sp?) but it still seems like it has no place here.


Now I have no idea what you are truly trying to aim for as far as his abilities since you haven't said anything about them But here are some suggestions.

1.Make a Jedah based off of him stealing pyrons powers: Original, sticks to the story sort of, reason behind why he would have new powers.

2. Add more blood based attacks and less generic evil attacks/lasers/what you might see in the average evil/orochi/shin/god edit of something.

3. Make it interesting so that Duece may actually consider allowing you to make an edit that he would allow you to release.

Keep trying, but make it interesting. And make sure you get duece's permisssion before release.

[deathkilla]

ok thank you for your advice I am going to keep them in memory in made I wanted to be productive jedah more hyper move ,intro and win pose , then you know it is my first experience of course I shall wait that deuce wants me to take out my edit

[Skank88]

And remember:

....make sure you get duece's permisssion before release.

[Bastard Mami]

nope, bbh's since bbh is deuce's spokesmanperson

[deathkilla]

hello great new deuce say me on msn he try the character this weekend and give me maybe the permission to release it !!

[ChronicDreamer]

yay

[alexlexus]

how can i get this jedah?

[Jesuszilla]

Do a barrel roll while self-fellating yourself.

[txrocker281]

In other words

[Cornholio]

Isn't that kind of redundant? Devil Jedah?

I mean he is the Vampire Savior so that pretty much already states that.

[Igniz]

It's worth noting that Jedah don't have anything to do with Pyron, at all. They didn't even meet or knew each other, ever.

Actually, Jedah is the youngest of the three High nobles of Makai (he is still over 6000 years old, though). His liquid body allows him to change into any shape he chooses. He is able to absorb the souls of others and can instantly increase his own powers.

Maybe you can use this as basis.

[Ridureyu]

It's worth noting that Jedah don't have anything to do with Pyron, at all. They didn't even meet or knew each other, ever.

They went to high school together.  Pyron was a jock, and Jedah was a goth.


...What?  How else do you think he learned to kill people by slitting his wrists?

[deathkilla]

thank igniz I shall keep your  idea deuce said me  that make seize it up it will have try devil jedah he will say to me answer for an exit deprived in made I wanted to change name for devil jedah I would like call him dark messiah jedah do not hesitate has give your opinions thank you

[deathkilla]

i post a vidz of my wip devil jedah
http://fr.youtube.com/watch?v=f4iibOxqWJE

[Cornholio]

It's worth noting that Jedah don't have anything to do with Pyron, at all. They didn't even meet or knew each other, ever.

They went to high school together.  Pyron was a jock, and Jedah was a goth.


...What?  How else do you think he learned to kill people by slitting his wrists?

bungholio????

[Alkanphel]

Judging by that video, it seems Devil Jedah has Orochi's bright Light.  Might I suggest scrapping that move altogether?  It doesn't fit him at all, plus way too many characters have that move anyway.  I suggest giving Jedah very gory moves.  Stuff that fits his whole theme of blood and self mutilation.  Stuff like lightning and laser beams and bright light just doesn't fit him as a character.  Perhaps instead of firing lasers from his chest as a super, he can release souls from his chest, and the souls attack the enemy by swarming around them? 

[MCX]

The name:''Devil Jedah''; it's look so strange, since Jedah it's a devil.

[ultimatedude]

The name:''Devil Jedah''; it's look so strange, since Jedah it's a devil.

Very true