My thoughts.I feel like the abdomen muscles need to be a bit wider from your most recent rendition. I think his right arm muscles are a bit too bulbous and look larger than his left arm.Finally, I feel the folds in his clothing don't match other Z2 characters. If you look at the other Z2 characters and the example Broly sprite endorsed by Balthazaar, the folds aren't quite as round and puffy as they are in your Broly's pants. I also feel like his red kilt's fold lines are a bit too long and heavy. It almost gives a plastic feel because it's so defined. Z2 folds seem to be a bit sharper yet less heavy than the clothing in your sprite. I hope this makes sense. Sometimes when you're scrutinizing small details, it can be hard to describe.Anyway, the sprite looks really great so far. There just seems to be a some more fixes that can be made to the muscles and clothing that could make the sprite mimic the Z2 style a little closer.
BizarroToro said, November 14, 2014, 04:29:49 pm.....I think am more close of Z2 style..[/URL]There's some improvement, but you really should take a look at the corrections I made on the old edit - pose, arms, leg positions,etc...:Spoiler, click to toggle visibiltyAlso for a stance Rugal's works really good (as also seen on Roken's magnificent Brolly) --> Proof: http://youtu.be/JnPbMzYgHZE?t=2m7salso a fast walk edit from SuperSonic Warriors with copy paste - yeah needs major work, especially head movement! I added two frames to the original 6, but it could be an easy base seeing how you could resize some movements from SuperSonic Warriors to 220% & then after that the legs to 110%
I'd go with a different pose tbh, for reasons I'd care not to say. :XAlso The pants and his robe still don't fit with the Z2 style imo.
^He has a point. I'd like to add that the face looks too round, he should have chiseled facial features IMO.I made this Broly sprite, twas a redux to an old sprite I made, and this one was critiqued by Balthazar himself, maybe you can try to take some pointers from it.P.S I actually used one of your sprites to help me figure out a lot of details.
BizarroToro said, September 29, 2016, 08:24:10 pma break time for do a definitive sprite base for entire character!!Your past attempts at making Broly were much better than this new sprite to be honest.I mean, what was wrong with the old one?The new sprite you've showed us is too fat and short, it's too stretched horizontally.You should have followed HQ's suggestions to make it better.HQ said, November 14, 2014, 05:29:36 pmThere's some improvement, but you really should take a look at the corrections I made on the old edit - pose, arms, leg positions,etc...:Spoiler, click to toggle visibilty[...]also a fast walk edit from SuperSonic Warriors with copy paste - yeah needs major work, especially head movement! I added two frames to the original 6, but it could be an easy base seeing how you could resize some movements from SuperSonic Warriors to 220% & then after that the legs to 110% In the old one the pants, the face, the hair... the entire shading was better.
I dunno how accurate this is to Z2, but i am fairly sure it fits with the style. Feel free to use this. I still need a lot of practice, and saw this as a great opportunity. Hope ya like it!Original palleteCPS3Custom Pallete
Long time ago am start with the ideas and tests, years am off of this proyect, am showing a progress of work that i did it in some months with my template for draw, i gonna try back to work in this w.i.p. again...The main idea is do a single character but in two versions...
Could definitely use tightening uo, and his head is pretty squashed, but a brilliant starting point. Good to see ya back dude!
BizarroToro said, August 19, 2021, 03:01:09 amThe main idea is do a single character but in two versions...Sooo Classic and Super Broly? *_*
Thanks friends...the progress is slowly but continues.....And the idea is do two versions with the same template....