Onju said, June 15, 2011, 07:38:19 pmLooks awesome compared to the first sprite. Good job! ThanksNavana said, June 15, 2011, 07:03:29 pmFeedback:- Abs look too scrunched up, IMO. Try smoothing it out.- Face needs more detail, I only see one eye, and not much more.- Hair needs a bit of movement as well, once again IMO.All I can think of right now, but I'm sure there is more. You're progressing.I tried to make his abs like they draw them in the animehis face only has an eye because its facing the side you cant see the other eyeand I'll work on the hair
I have not posted anything lately but the project is still going Here is Luffy's walk animations first frame
Orochi Gill said, December 03, 2011, 07:18:51 pmThere's still 10 million things wrong. Shading, animation, etccan you please tell me whats wrong specifically I'll try and improve itoh and thanks Jed
ARCoolguy said, December 03, 2011, 07:28:13 pmOrochi Gill said, December 03, 2011, 07:18:51 pmThere's still 10 million things wrong. Shading, animation, etccan you please tell me whats wrong specifically I'll try and improve itoh and thanks Jedwell for me it's hard to teach someone art but the bast way to go about is look at the where the lighting goes also the smaller the sprite the less detail they have but not too much in the wrong areas and it look pillow shady too less it looks 8bity usually when you zoom in to have a look we forget that when zoom it back to check if it looks good small but i think your detail is good just need better shading you might need to look at shading lessons on the net but being a guy like me who really never took lessons much and doesn't have time to want to learn or teach it also the way I started was editing sprites and look very carefully how they are shaded yeah it's not easy to figure out you really gotta have an eye for this stuff and that takes time to develop it so the bast thing you should do draw and shade a lot the best artiest in animation have told me you have to draw like it's part of your life ever day anywhere ya can when ya can but even i don't do that but i have years of spiriting on my belt not why I'm that way but i guess I'm a fast learner or something XD so it depends how well you focus on it sucks that mugen isn't a slap on and make thing ya gotta have the skill of a animator to do this stuff XD hope this advice helps in someway dude cya
The chest on that and your sig is horribly misplaced. I don't really like the head.You've seen some of Diepod's stuff, if you're going to make some sprites then make a 2d sketch first and then do some techniques to make sprites and sprite animations out of it..............Hey wait, I told you that already . Do it....now!
Thanks for the tips guys I'll work on itanyways I got tired of making Luffy sprites so I made thisNatsu Dragneel from Fairy Tailits still unfinished as you can tell by looking at the feet
ARCoolguy said, December 07, 2011, 01:40:54 pmThanks for the tips guys I'll work on itanyways I got tired of making Luffy sprites so I made thisNatsu Dragneel from Fairy Tailits still unfinished as you can tell by looking at the feetYou have been spriteing for a while now..i think you should try too start off with shapes..(I know ur chars is a male but you should still check this)http://windam.deviantart.com/art/mannequin-framework-practice-84382982\See how this artist draws shapes?? try it and see what happens...just keep at it man
ARCoolguy said, December 08, 2011, 12:53:32 pm@thanewdude07thx for the advice I'll try it out and see if its helpfulI hope it will..Dont worry about adding details take one step at a time.just work on shapes and post them up here...thats a good start
