Michael Jackson 1980s

Started by Girku, April 08, 2010, 07:38:56 AM

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Girku

Okay..Heres the first animation..The classic crotch grab  :sugoi:

Critiques and what not are greatly appreciated  ;D



Girku


Nnaajj

I really don't like the sprites.
The problem is that having such size for a sprite makes it much harder for a flawless final product. Many more errors can be made and lots other things. Stick with the average sized sprite and you'll probably do a better job. Once you get more skilled in spriting then try Hi Res.
Quote from: Luis Alejandro on July 27, 2010, 07:46:45 PM
Quote from: RaiN on July 27, 2010, 07:44:57 PM
Kinda strange but I woke up today and her hand was on my ass cheek
I won't suspect anything though I'll take it she was sleeping and didn't notice
you should have flipped over slowly

Andre #2

If you're trying to match the music video then you're off. He didn't wear that shirt. That's the shirt from "Beat It" with the red jacket.

this is what he wore in "Billie Jean"



Version 3.0 coming... Um...  When I get to it.

Girku

Umm no...I'm pretty sure I know what I'm doing  --;




PsychoDynamic

Quote from: Getsuga Tensho on April 12, 2010, 09:35:41 AM
Umm no...I'm pretty sure I know what I'm doing  --;




do you now  :D
guess you dont need us after all

"actions have reactions dont be quick quick to judge,
you may not know the hardships people dont speak of,
it's best to step back and observe with couth,
for we all must meet our moment of truth"
Credit To Yzan

Girku

Lol whats that supposed to mean? Of course I need help but more on a constructive criticism side..

PsychoDynamic

Quote from: Getsuga Tensho on April 12, 2010, 09:35:41 AM
Umm no...I'm pretty sure I know what I'm doing
not the way to go about attracting feedback good sir

"actions have reactions dont be quick quick to judge,
you may not know the hardships people dont speak of,
it's best to step back and observe with couth,
for we all must meet our moment of truth"
Credit To Yzan

darkgirl

I think that sprites need some tweaks.  The high resolution is very complex and sometimes can cost to make a sprite.

Girku

Quote from: PsychoDynamic on April 12, 2010, 04:48:56 PM
Quote from: Getsuga Tensho on April 12, 2010, 09:35:41 AM
Umm no...I'm pretty sure I know what I'm doing
not the way to go about attracting feedback good sir
But anyone with common sense would understand what I meant...so I dont think I need to explain myself...

Nnaajj

I gave you feedback, you didn't even notice.
darkgirl gave you feedback, you didn't even notice.
So what you talking about when you say "need more constructive criticism".
Quote from: Luis Alejandro on July 27, 2010, 07:46:45 PM
Quote from: RaiN on July 27, 2010, 07:44:57 PM
Kinda strange but I woke up today and her hand was on my ass cheek
I won't suspect anything though I'll take it she was sleeping and didn't notice
you should have flipped over slowly

Titiln


PsychoDynamic

looks like what he's lookin for is reassurance
"oh this is cool this is so tight"
He doesn't want critique because it's not feedin his id
guess i dont have the common sense to leave this thread alone

"actions have reactions dont be quick quick to judge,
you may not know the hardships people dont speak of,
it's best to step back and observe with couth,
for we all must meet our moment of truth"
Credit To Yzan

Girku

I am taking what those two said into account and I am making the changes accordingly
I was talking about the costume design   --; Andre said that I had the costume design wrong specifically his shirt.. Andre was misinformed of what things MJ wore in 1984 during the Victory Tour So I posted 2 examples to show that I knew what I was doing as far what I was aiming for...

Andre #2

Yes I was misinformed about the Victory tour that You did not mention in your first post. 

Version 3.0 coming... Um...  When I get to it.

Girku

Quote from: Andre #2 on April 15, 2010, 11:59:15 PM
Yes I was misinformed about the Victory tour that You did not mention in your first post.
I didnt think it was that important of a detail... o_O

the_mith

Nice victory tour pictures

You better off chosing a much more recognisable billie jean outfit, such as the plain white top like anything Bad tour and after. The shading on your pic isn't perfect on top of which the proportions are pretty off. As an example MJ's cheek bone is huge on your pic as well as his eyebrows.The positioning of his right foot is wrong for the moonwalk which is what im guessing your going for. Put the fedora on him so it makes his face easier. I was working on a High res MJ sprite but lost the motivation really quick. I suggest you do a low-res sprite.

I always shine!

Duo Solo

Your sprites remind me of a painting I would see in a museum. Not only that, its like your sprites are a mix of both high and low resolution and the outcome is not pretty. Dub it down to low res, the sprites will look a lot better.

Girku


Girku

Okay heres the sprite updated a bit



Okay this is done from scratch..Im in the process of using Kyo as a base