zero suit samus new sprite 03/31/13

Started by Dfalcon, July 07, 2012, 01:26:41 AM

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Dfalcon

it not much but its a start

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Dfalcon


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Long John Killer

#2
A few things.  One, her suit has more lines flowing across it, separating to different shades of blue.  She's also missing the symbol on her chest.  On the intro, it's a good idea for her losing her suit, but where does her back arm go?  The rest of her is static, so shouldn't her arm stay in place as well?

It's an interesting character to start work on, though, so I wish you luck.  Will she have moves based on her Super Smash Bros. appearance, or are you going for original gameplay?

Dfalcon

#3
the arm is actually close up to her chest but ill fix it up that her arm is down as well as for the detail right now im having a bit of a hard time im trying my best to make this as good as i could make it and for move wise im gonna try to be close to brawl but bring in some new attacks for originality

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Dfalcon

okay i fixed a aprt of her stance to have more detail

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DatKofGuy

I'm guessing the base is Rikard's Kei Nanasawa

Dfalcon


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Dfalcon

#7
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im gonna be fixing up the Armour intro next that try to give her ponytail life

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YoungSamurai5

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Karasai

the run looks really awkward

Kreuzer

I really think you should practise more, your sprites are not best quality, I dont tell you have to be another Chamat or Diepod, but please put yourself to this.

Dfalcon

Quote from: Human on July 09, 2012, 11:41:30 PM
I really think you should practise more, your sprites are not best quality, I dont tell you have to be another Chamat or Diepod, but please put yourself to this.
if you dont like it dont follow  it that all i have to say i may not be as good as everyone else but im learning leave it at that

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Karasai

All he's saying is that you need to practice on your sprites. He wasng insulting you or anything  --;

Lunchbillion

Well yeah, but at the same time he wasn't being constructive at all.


For this sprite, it looks a little weird because... well it's only half the run cycle. She should probably step with the other leg, too. And swing both arms. Lastly, her ponytail could definitely use some movement. Good luck.  :)
Formerly LunchPolice aka Quack

Laharl

needs alot of work correct good luck.

Quote from: Cybaster on May 21, 2013, 04:37:37 PM
You'll fix chuchoryu ? Sounds like a plan. How about you code him from scratch instead ?

YoungSamurai5

the run just needs a pony tail animation. lets be real who doesnt need practice and doesnt want to keep becoming better at spriting? im sure no offense was mean to be take, d just took it that way. im sure d appreciates the feedback but please put some possitive comments also so you just wont make him feel like his work is a complete failure

edit: dang LunchPolice aka Quack beat me to it lol
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Karasai

Quote from: YoungSamurai5 on July 10, 2012, 04:27:22 AM
the run just needs a pony tail animation.

So Samus can look like she has roller skates? The animation isnt even finished

Dfalcon

what ever think what you want  --; i know my talents and if it not the best quality why dont you help me?

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YoungSamurai5

lol so you didnt see my edit karasai i said that quack beat me to it. she obviously needs some work with quack addressed
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