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Marshall Law from Tekken

Started by Gritsmaster, August 15, 2012, 02:02:46 AM

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Gritsmaster

Hello, you beautiful people! :3
This is my project



More to come soon!
UPDATE 8/16/12 New Standing Sprites

Duo Solo

What kind of moves will he have? :beam:

Gritsmaster

Well at the moment it's just an edit of Daigo (BBB), but I'll probably be searching for a coder after I finish the sprites. Either that or I'll release a complete spritepack and let folks do what they want with it.  :)

Duo Solo

I know coders can't wait to get their hands on your sprites! keep up the progress Gritsmaster!

x Fly

He needs some work on his look, his torso looks twisted and face looks small and deformed. work on that man. other than that. good luck

Kanbei

Aside From The Sprites looking Werid, Dude You Made My Day I Hope You Can Complete This Character I Always Wanted A Marshall Law For Mugen.

Gritsmaster

Quote from: x Fly on August 15, 2012, 02:50:16 AM
He needs some work on his look, his torso looks twisted and face looks small and deformed. work on that man. other than that. good luck

Hey man what do you think about this for his face?

Karasai

Everything looks nice but the face looks a bit scrunched

YoungSamurai5

yes i agree face looks a bit scrunched but aside from that good luck with this :)
its looking petty cool
mugen or nothin


Gritsmaster

*Updated standing sprites*
It's coming along, thanks for all the support so far  :sugoi:

FeLo_Llop

I'm sorry to say this but...sprites looks terrible.


- Dark skin just to define the chest.
- TWO COLOURS for muscles.
- Head Ctrl+C, Ctrl+V.
- TWO COLOURS for the pants.

Seriously, and being sincere...learn the basics of spriting and once you learn, do it. Otherwise, you'll have a terrible looking Law.

Not trying to be harsh, but people with "WOAH!NICE +1!" won't help you, since those kids just want to fill their mugen. And in this whole page, no one has given a critique(aside the head), even the problems. All are "petty cool", "looks nice". Nothing constructive.

C'mon! you can do a better thing! Law is worth of more!

[ Rose/ C.Viper/ Mars People/ Ash Crimson / Ivan Ooze ]: Finished
[ Shiki / Mature ] W.i.P.
[ ?? / ?? ]: Possible W.i.P.

Fabry Taz

you may try to use fei long as the base... test and see how it goes ....

YoungSamurai5

Quote from: FeLo_Llop on August 17, 2012, 06:22:07 PM
I'm sorry to say this but...sprites looks terrible.


- Dark skin just to define the chest.
- TWO COLOURS for muscles.
- Head Ctrl+C, Ctrl+V.
- TWO COLOURS for the pants.

Seriously, and being sincere...learn the basics of spriting and once you learn, do it. Otherwise, you'll have a terrible looking Law.

Not trying to be harsh, but people with "WOAH!NICE +1!" won't help you, since those kids just want to fill their mugen. And in this whole page, no one has given a critique(aside the head), even the problems. All are "petty cool", "looks nice". Nothing constructive.

C'mon! you can do a better thing! Law is worth of more!

i admit i didnt want to be harsh and that was wrong, but i am certainly no kid. ok here is my true critique

i like the lower body (still need a bit of work) but the upper body needs to be completely redone. as taz said try to look at fei long as a possible sort of base for law, just use certain part of fei long not the whole thing because in my personal opinion he is overused.
mugen or nothin


TETSUGA GENSHO

looking great but .. this is from roman



i told him about the diago from BBB and he made this for me.

Gritsmaster

Thanks guys, I really appreciate the critique. Already working on revamping the sprites :D
This is my first project, so I'm a little wet behind the ears. I love the opinions when you got 'em, my only goal is to make the best Marshall I can and hopefully grow as a spriter! So while I certainly appreciate the compliments, constructive criticism is all I'm looking for! 

YoungSamurai5

once again thank you @FeLo_Llop you remind me why i come here because you guys here are not afraid to give constructive criticism. i hope everything goes well @Gritsmaster and i hope this turns into a great character
mugen or nothin


Jetire911

Quote from: Gritsmaster on August 18, 2012, 01:21:00 AM
Thanks guys, I really appreciate the critique. Already working on revamping the sprites :D
This is my first project, so I'm a little wet behind the ears. I love the opinions when you got 'em, my only goal is to make the best Marshall I can and hopefully grow as a spriter! So while I certainly appreciate the compliments, constructive criticism is all I'm looking for! 

That is a great attitude and I wish their were more creators with an attitude like yours. The MUGEN community needs more people actually accepting critism with an open mind and who also actually understands something about fighting games rather than basing their fighting game knowledge from Smash Bros Melee or something. Keep up with Marshall Law, dude, if you redo the sprites you could have a great character here.

Fabry Taz

try to use this as a basis....I made it , I hope you will put to good use

Markpachi

Quote from: TETSUGA GENSHO on August 18, 2012, 12:45:57 AM

If I were you, i'd go with this one as a base because it looks better IMO.

Rest in peace, Tamez. Thank you for everything.

Kreuzer

I think easiest way is headswap of Fei-Long with pant swap.