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Started by Seifer Firehart, February 17, 2012, 09:00:05 PM

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Seifer Firehart

Still in progress. Seifer Firehart in training suit. Still need to take care of this awful boots.

UPDATED!!
Now it is something :D Please comment :D


Seifer Firehart

over 100 views and no replies?  --; Maybe Sanji will do something with it  :)

Koju-kun


stevla83

The shape with the left foot on Sanji looks to big and oddly made. The color in the cigerette in his mouth needs some grey shading so it won't look like its apart of his mouth and his teeth need some grey shading abit too to add some depth to it. Change the black outline of the hair to a gold-ish color also change the black outline that makes sanji's chin and the black outlining of the ear to a brown same goes for part of the neck. All in all it looks good just do afew changes here and there and it'll look great

Seifer Firehart


AlexSin

#5
The sprites are good, but the right (your left) eye changes shape when transforming, but maybe you did that on purpose.
And the SSJ hair could be a bit bigger...
I did some really small edits on your normal sprite and modified a bit the hair (right sprite), I hope you don't become angry:


Edit: I forgot to put SSJ hair.

Seifer Firehart

Eyes change 'coz he gets more serious. Of course I'm not angry (unless you will claim this sprite as yours :D). I only see some hair change and gray shaded eye.

AlexSin

#7
Anyway, I think a bit more contrast on the palette is needed on his skin, but everything else is perfect.

On the Seifer sprites without the boots in you first post, I think the left (your right) foot is small, compared to the right (your left) one.

Seifer Firehart

Updated with SSJ2, changed darkened darkest skin color a bit. Working on SSJ3 hair.
NOT FOR COPY!! :D (that's to motherf***ing thiefs).

Karasai

Im sure newbies to spriting dont know about the eraser trick, you could do this for your sprites so nobody steals them and also so we can critique your sprites


or put some kind of logo in the background and repeat it over and over

Seifer Firehart

Heh, Im not newbie in spriting, but definitely newbie in tricks :D Can you explain what do you mean? This image does not prevent stealing in any way :D.

Karasai

You select a color, use the eraser and right click, and that specific color will be gone

AlexSin

#12
Murzymundo sucks? If you have to tell me (PM), right now I can't understand (or maybe yes? >:D)

I can't see any errors there, you did a great work.

Why don't you show your arts from Samouczek? I like that Vegeta and Goku a lot!

Sorry if it is off topic, but I want to understand clearly how you
Quote from: Karasai on July 28, 2012, 09:34:15 PM
use the eraser and right click, and that specific color will be gone

Oh, wow, now I see! Nevermind then.





Seifer Firehart

Goku End-Z, new version.

Here is old one for comparision.

AlexSin

I think the shading is right, but did you change the light source?

Seifer Firehart

#15
No, it's like always from opponent side, a little above opponent. I think it was unnecessary for me to light his shoulder but he is not standing fully by side to the opponent.

      Posted: September 02, 2012, 03:37:37 PM
Goku SSJ4!! UB22 size.

BASE

      Posted: September 13, 2012, 07:57:21 PM
Perfect Cell, oh yeah, Kanzentai Seru! It's first time I've done Cell.


And the base.
Spoiler (click to show)

kakabot

Really digin the end of Z goku, is he gonna be a full char or just a one off?

Seifer Firehart

#17
Yes, Gokou End-Z will be mine next project, after Bejiita.
Upgraded Cell + outlines version.



AlexSin

Quote from: Seifer Firehart on September 14, 2012, 07:53:44 PM
Yes, Gokou End-Z will be mine next project, after Bejiita.

I didn't know that. That means you can use well the Ps2 emulator...
Ah, nevermind.
Now the dots in Cell's body look like the ones in the ShinB sprite. :)


LurkMoar

i'm gonna have to thank you because you gave me an idea.
"Improvise. adapt. overcome."