Please. Need feedback.

Started by TITAN MADRE, November 13, 2013, 05:21:06 PM

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TITAN MADRE

Hi,
I need some feedback.
good or bad, likes or not. Its not important.

I need to know if works or not. If not, please tell me why.

Thanks.


Markpachi

- The face looks kinda weird IMO, but I guess it's too late for that.
- The right part looks well shaded compared to the other side which looks "lacking".



That's pretty much all the things I can see right now. Good job.

Rest in peace, Tamez. Thank you for everything.

FeLo_Llop

Pretty much the face. If you could add more VIOLENCE to those eyes, and or making a "larger" head(as a real dragon's could be) it would be 100/100!!

[ Rose/ C.Viper/ Mars People/ Ash Crimson / Ivan Ooze ]: Finished
[ Shiki / Mature ] W.i.P.
[ ?? / ?? ]: Possible W.i.P.

walt

Quote from: Markpachi on November 13, 2013, 06:04:39 PM
- The right part looks well shaded compared to the other side which looks "lacking".
This is the key here.

Mark's comment brought to my attention that these are supposed to be different textures. While on the right side, the shapes are round and well defined in almost any possible way, the lines on the left side are more like straight lines ... is he turning into Ice on that side?

All in all, looks Anime-ish enough, and pretty legit for the most part, if you ask me. The only part that breaks that illusion, is the round shapes used in the toe nails on the left side, which looks more like an "unfinished sketch" as compared to the rest of the piece.

Pretty good all in all.


TITAN MADRE

Markpachi: had problems testing eye effects. Finally use egg ball eyes.
                 Like walt said, his right arm is like ice. In fact is some type of rock. I'm failed, I couldn't show it properly.

Fello: Thanks for your comment,
         Yes, I can see it now . The head looks tiny.
         About eyes i will study more. Its a technical problem. I couldn't find a ink solution.

Walt:  Yes, his right arm  is turning into Ice rock.
         About sketch thing... No round nails. Ok. I will.




Thanks all of you for those useful feedback.