[Theme Thread] CVS Sprite thread

Started by Formerly Hoshi, April 21, 2010, 09:51:37 PM

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S. Jetstream

It looks splendid!!
But imo you could give him a bit more light in his left arm(our right) and check the hands again they look a bit small

demongorne

the different shading in the arms I'ts due the fact I used evil dan kooken stance as reference, in regard to the hands probably maybe they need more details i'll take care of them, thanks for collaboration

Did you notice the lil detail I added in his sleeve?

MotorRoach

Actually, yeah, now that you mention it. Looks pretty neat.
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hatter



It's not done, but I wanted to show you how I might go about with Shen Woo in the future. I'm actually happy with how the proportions turned out.

Next time, you'll probably see an animated version of the idle.
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S. Jetstream

His face claims for a nose! anyway good work there
IMO there are way too many abs and the pecs don't look part of the chest :P

hatter

Ahhh the dreaded nose issue.

And can you explain the last part? I didn't get what you're referring to about the pecs.
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YugaCurry

Quote from: Zaitsu Hatter on November 13, 2015, 02:30:47 AM
And can you explain the last part? I didn't get what you're referring to about the pecs.

I think he means that the pecs are not supposed to be in the chest area. His chest seems small. You could enlarge it and lower the pecs.

Karasai

I made a few edits, im bad with words


The notable changes are the abs and the hair. I'm not that good with shading muscles but I took some sprites as reference.

You're improving! I'm not an expert at the style but I can tell you that observing official sprites helps a lot. At least with shading that is.

hatter

Ahahaha, that looks much better, the hair is amazing. I'll fix it up and try to make an animated version soon. ^_^

Thanks guys, you're all a group of Godsends. :) :)
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HadeS

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I hope you don't mind but I tried to edit him too. I tried mixing what Karasai did with mine too, because I think his fixes are good :)
Karasai + my edit:
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@[user id=71813]Karasai[/user]: I hope it's fine with you editing it without asking.

hatter

The head edit you did is great, so I'll be referencing that. :)
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hatter

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[REMOVED BECAUSE I'M TRYING TO REVAMP THIS]

@[user id=8917]HadeS[/user]:
@[user id=71813]Karasai[/user]:

Better? I didn't copy everything to the tee, but I tried to follow along by redrawing the stuff you edited on my own sprite.
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HadeS

Let's see, what I'm going to say is for good. Please don't take it in a bad way. I'm here to help you :)

- You changed the angle of his head, completely. I don't know why but Shen Woo has the head like you started it (and then we followed). I made it bigger because I felt it was tiny compared to the rest of his body.
- The neck of his shirt looks weird, it doesn't look like one (Compare what we both did).
- His upper body is misplaced (compare with mine and follow the dark lines, where they end).
- His pectorals look flat.
- You have to work better on the anti-alias. you missed it on his jacket and pants.
- His pants (well, legs) look too thin and it's weird bellow the "brown ribbon" (whatever that is).
- His right shoe (our left) looks flat. If you want to keep it that way, shrink it to the side some because it's exaggerated.
- His left shoe (our right) looks cut. Compare what Karasai did on both cases.
- I like what you did with his left hand (our right) :)
- I'm glad you used the palette I made for him. I wanted to keep reducing the colors to 16 but it didn't work. It end up with 18 :P

hatter

You made the head bigger? Funny, it actually looks the same size from where I'm standing (speaking of your edit), but that's probably because it's at small size.

No problem, man. I'll probably be working on him and asking for feedback here, because I want him to become the future (like Kyo!)
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HadeS

It's subtle but I did. Check his hair too :P


Sure! What I forgot to tell you is that you improved the way you edit faces. It still needed to be fixed but it wasn't like others you'd posted before :)

hatter

Quote from: HadeS on November 14, 2015, 03:17:16 PM
It's subtle but I did. Check his hair too :P


Before this, I thought the only difference between your head and mine was the hair. Now I see it all, holy fucking shit, hahaha.

Quote from: HadeS on November 14, 2015, 03:17:16 PM
Sure! What I forgot to tell you is that you improved the way you edit faces. It still needed to be fixed but it wasn't like others you'd posted before :)

That's a good start, hopefully my anatomy and the way I handle pixelated clothing will improve as well for this style. :D
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S. Jetstream

It didn't work at all

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hatter

Compare the arm muscles in your rendition to that of the other sprite, you'll notice that you lack certain details (I know, this is like my nose issue, and so many other things >_<).

Try looking at Joe Higashi/Ryuji Yamazaki to get an idea. Heck, even your own CvS Sagat sprites can do.
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lui



okay so this has been done for about a week now, i just forgot to upload it lol

anywho, i knew that alisa could NEVER achieve her look in under 16 colors so i said fuck it and decided to color seperate her and had fun with it. you know what i hated about drawing this? HER FUCKING SHOES.

I wouldn't mind doing a full sprite WIP of her if someone were to provide me crisp screencaps from SFXT