My best sprite yet :3

Started by Raiden, December 22, 2007, 06:26:02 PM

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Raiden

Wow this took forever to do and its 100% scratch




Point out flaws please :P

Bastard Mami

100% scratch is a bad idea. even the most professional of professional artists use references.

OZ

The arm facing the screen looks too boxy and rectangular.

Only showing one side of his face looks wierd.
Try showing both eyes at the same time while he is facing forward.
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aokmaniac13

#3
Looks squished like Capcom sprites
Right arm (artist's left) has a strange bend in it.

Quote from: R[E]ika on December 22, 2007, 06:32:14 PM
100% scratch is a bad idea. even the most professional of professional artists use references.
I'd say something demeaning here, but I won't.

OZ

#4
Seems to have a large abyssal area in between his mouth and his nose.
(He could have one hell of a moustache.)

His chin could be stronger I guess.


Also:
He could probably use a neck
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FeLo_Llop

Quote from: R[E]ika on December 22, 2007, 06:32:14 PM
100% scratch is a bad idea. even the most professional of professional artists use references.
You're wong ;) remember my Kunimitsu, Zafina and othe tekken sprites from scratch.


'Bout the sprite: that's OK, but I can see A LOT OF Sagat in it. If you say is 100% scratch, OK, but I'd say it's resized parts of him.

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Quote from: Lo Llop on December 22, 2007, 08:11:54 PM
'Bout the sprite: that's OK, but I can see A LOT OF Sagat in it. If you say is 100% scratch, OK, but I'd say it's resized parts of him.

I thought this too, but hey if the author says its from scratch then i'll believe them.

Erm who is this ment to be? Is it supposed to be anyone or is it a completely original character?

Either way, the points I would have made have already been made. The only thing I'd add to the comments is to add more detail/definition to the shorts, atm it looks like he's got a towel wrapped around his waist as if he just got out the shower.

Good luck  :sugoi:

I always shine!

Bastard Mami

currentlyi would suggest to use bases to get the anatomy right.

Raiden

#8
well tbh i redrawn some of sagats parts to just make it look like a human.

would you say its fixed?



Calypso

interesting sprite and specialy when it's done from scratch. There's some work to be done on it but you're getting there.

Also:



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Raiden

hehe made me lol. But thanks for noticing :P i have fixed it.

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OZ

You actually took my advise.
Good Job :thumbsup:

The only problem I have is still that one arm.
Good improvement though.
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Raiden


OZ

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OZ

No.
He has become something more.
Much more.
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Raiden

#17
Lol have a look at the thighs.... They are bigger than my belly. AND im obesed!



scary thing is he is not even flexing...

I would like to challenge him to a arm wrestle!




OZ

He looks inflatable.

BTW:your sprite's good.
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