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Started by Borghi, December 28, 2007, 06:10:11 PM

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Borghi

hello!
I wasn't going to make a wip of my next char but I'm forced to do it because I'm really lacking some motivation. So, it would be cool to hear some ideas fom the community to refresh my brain. I won't be releasing this char alone. Im releasing him within the fullgame I'm making which I hope will be my next release. I'm rushing that because I'm getting more and more busy with other stuff and I want to have the game done before is too late to having time for it.

But this wip is about this char and not the game.




So, as you see, the guy likes torture. He tortures the opponent and sometimes even himself in the process. that would be the main concept. As a detail he is sometimes a guy and sometimes a girl (Pot's must hate me, I explained that to him like 1700 times) but I have no sprites of that yet. He turn into a girl (looks like a femenine version of him) to make some attacks. he has no transition for that. its like a POOF! and she's there. So, its not a guy that transforms into a girl, its just sometimes one, sometimes the other. No defined genre.

any ideas?  :D
      
Little John from the big castle, plays with little friend,
snip! snip! snip! off goes his head, bright red! bright red!

walt

Quote from: Borghi on December 28, 2007, 06:10:11 PM
As a detail he is sometimes a guy and sometimes a girl (Pot's must hate me, I explained that to him like 1700 times) but I have no sprites of that yet. He turn into a girl (looks like a femenine version of him) to make some attacks. he has no transition for that. its like a POOF! and she's there. So, its not a guy that transforms into a girl, its just sometimes one, sometimes the other. No defined genre.
That sounds fucking awesome. I'm a fan already.

So what's its fighting style? does it use weapons?

Borghi

thanks!
well, i still dont know about weapons, but could be interesting. I was thinking about a chain with a hook but the problem of that is the obvious reference to hellraiser and the fact that animating a chain is like being in hell with pinhead putting melted iron in your balls.

about the fighting style, i was thinking on some wild movements. something like orochi iori who is always excited and seems to have no control on his movements. and he always smiles and laughs even when he is dead.
      
Little John from the big castle, plays with little friend,
snip! snip! snip! off goes his head, bright red! bright red!

videoman

I guess his style is torture-masochist (it's into S&M) and it gets stronger if you attack it kind of like samurai showdown! 

Borghi

oh, but that would make him a bosslike guy
      
Little John from the big castle, plays with little friend,
snip! snip! snip! off goes his head, bright red! bright red!

DemonicDrPhil

maybe a temporary attack boost hyper or special that gives more strength based on how much damage was taken off?

it could last for 5 or 10 seconds and then have him vulnerable for a bit after it is finished so that it is more balanced.
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OrochiWeapon2000

Since it seems to enjoy causing damage to itself, it could just cause more damage to the opponent with it's moves. One idea I can toss your way is to have various attacks that make the opponent bleed constantly, which would drain the opponent's life points for a short time. Implementing a type of counter system would be another idea, as moves that would make the opponent bleed normally would make them bleed even more as a counter attack.

Borghi

Quote from: OrochiWeapon2000 on December 28, 2007, 07:35:58 PM
Since it seems to enjoy causing damage to itself, it could just cause more damage to the opponent with it's moves. One idea I can toss your way is to have various attacks that make the opponent bleed constantly, which would drain the opponent's life points for a short time. Implementing a type of counter system would be another idea, as moves that would make the opponent bleed normally would make them bleed even more as a counter attack.

uhm sounds weird. But the thing i that a bleeding system looks like something all the chars in a full game should have and not just 1. like in the latest mk games
      
Little John from the big castle, plays with little friend,
snip! snip! snip! off goes his head, bright red! bright red!

Bastard Mami

i will re-read some koroshiya ichi - ichi the killer, since one of the main characters is a masochistic, same for a guy on naruto. about the naruto guy, he has techniques in which he damages himself, and the oponent also ges teh same damage in the process, as if the guy's body acts as a voodoo doll of the oponent.

Cybaster

I already like this character. :D

For his throw, I'd see a Blanka type move where he would bite his opponent very hard.
He could indeed cut himself with a knife to gain more power during a certain amount of time.
A super move like Peketo's fatality, but with much more torture would be a nice idea too (yeah, chains are a bitch to do, but...)

Quote from: R[E]ika on December 28, 2007, 09:45:44 PM
same for a guy on naruto. about the naruto guy, he has techniques in which he damages himself, and the oponent also ges teh same damage in the process, as if the guy's body acts as a voodoo doll of the oponent.



i_oVo_i

Vlad.. Vampire-ish name, why not making a move where he can gain life by draining the opponents, that'll be cool for a bosslike char.
Like the concept btw.

Iced

#11
"cracks knuckles"

Psychotic Hammer down, shoving nails on his chest he pounds the nails into himself with a hammer, at each trust his back with the nails popping shoves into the direction of the opponent.

psycho stare, his eyes shine red for a moment, there is a blink and in a moment he is no longer there( the shining eyes remaining) and his female form is behind the opponent ready to do a followup.

-The Iron Maiden, from female form he can follow up into this move where he encapsulates the opponent into a ironmaiden, acting like a short range throw
-Bloody laughter-from female form whilst laughing he/she shoves a metal spike onto his stomach, spraying blood outwards as a projectile.

-Human bondage -throw where he twists his own body, breaking his bones as he ties the opponent down and constricts them for damage.

-Blood puppet, strings of blood, emanating from his wounded back lash out into the top of the stage, coming down onto the opponent and holding them onto place.

Bondage freak-Ties himself down onto the ground and jumps towards the opponent ,with several spikes on his body acting as the attack.

Wait, You want sexual overtones to him, or only violence overtones?

Psst, Try this for a intro, he on a military outfit with a fetishistic gas mask on his face... General Pain!

Makkah

This character looks pretty interesting. Here's some ideas I came up with:

You could make him break his arm, and use the exposed bone to stab his opponent.

He could light himself on fire, and charge towards his enemy while holding a bottle of gasoline. When he gets close he breaks the bottle, and ka-blewy!

The female form could break her knee, and twirl around like a ballerina, repeatedly slashing the enemy.

Phinsfan

Looks kind of like a Demonic Admiral Ackbar.

Jango

I'd suggest more craziness with his mouth (like biting people), use of syringes for activating supers, and lots and lots of twisting his body around in uncomfortable positions ala Zappa.

Cybaster

Voldo from Soul Calibur may be a good reference too, concerning body distorsion and SM stuff.

The Zorc

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Quote from: Makkah on December 29, 2007, 03:34:32 AM
You could make him break his arm, and use the exposed bone to stab his opponent.

I was just going to say that...
he holds one of his arms with the other arm, breaks his arm against his tibia, then impales his opponent with the broken bone which is still part of his arm...after he deals with the opponent, he performs a ritual which heals/gives him his arm back


another move:

stabs himself in the abdomen(stabbing the stomach in the process), then takes his stomach out, and squeezes it, squirting a stream of gastric juices/acid
an option, is that after the opponent is hit , after few seconds you can set him on fire...like Jagi in HNK



more to come, because now I can't
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Cybaster

Also, taking the heart directly into the body of the opponent (à la Rasetsumaru from Samurai Shodown) could be a nice finish move or Lv2 super.

Borghi

well, there are some nice ideas here.

the self-voodoo-doll is an interesting concept. Ill think about that. could be interesting.

Quote from: asrwgm on December 29, 2007, 02:23:14 AM
Vlad.. Vampire-ish name, why not making a move where he can gain life by draining the opponents, that'll be cool for a bosslike char.
Like the concept btw.

well, the name Vlad is a provisional one. Actually he needs a rumanian name but didnt find a good one yet. Although Vladimir sounds good (not too original but it's interesting). mmm.... I suppose it's a russian name but, i don't really know.

Quote from: Iced on December 29, 2007, 02:36:39 AM
"cracks knuckles"

Psychotic Hammer down, shoving nails on his chest he pounds the nails into himself with a hammer, at each trust his back with the nails popping shoves into the direction of the opponent.

psycho stare, his eyes shine red for a moment, there is a blink and in a moment he is no longer there( the shining eyes remaining) and his female form is behind the opponent ready to do a followup.

-The Iron Maiden, from female form he can follow up into this move where he encapsulates the opponent into a ironmaiden, acting like a short range throw

ICED!
well, I was really thinking in an iron maiden. In fact, my best option was an "iron virgin" another torture stuff which I don't really know if actually exists but I read about it in a book and looks pretty freaky. It's an automat human-size doll made of metal representing a nude girl. it you touch a jewel in her neck she hugs you and her metal breasts open popping out knives that kill you. THAT IS SURELY WEIRD but i didnt find the way of turning it into an efective attack.

Quote from: Iced on December 29, 2007, 02:36:39 AM
-Bloody laughter-from female form whilst laughing he/she shoves a metal spike onto his stomach, spraying blood outwards as a projectile.

Noroko has a blood projectile already

Quote from: Iced on December 29, 2007, 02:36:39 AM
-Human bondage -throw where he twists his own body, breaking his bones as he ties the opponent down and constricts them for damage.

-Blood puppet, strings of blood, emanating from his wounded back lash out into the top of the stage, coming down onto the opponent and holding them onto place.

Bondage freak-Ties himself down onto the ground and jumps towards the opponent ,with several spikes on his body acting as the attack.

interesting. he will have a throw where, as a she, hugs the opponent and lies into a bed nail nailing both of them. and she laughs.

Quote from: Iced on December 29, 2007, 02:36:39 AM
Wait, You want sexual overtones to him, or only violence overtones?

Open mind!!!  o_O
well she will have a kinda sexual move but I don't know, I just don't want to tell you alllll the things the char will have or won't be any surprises.  :S

Quote from: Iced on December 29, 2007, 02:36:39 AM
Psst, Try this for a intro, he on a military outfit with a fetishistic gas mask on his face... General Pain!

mmm.. Letme think about it.....  :-\

Quote from: Makkah on December 29, 2007, 03:34:32 AM
This character looks pretty interesting. Here's some ideas I came up with:

You could make him break his arm, and use the exposed bone to stab his opponent.

He could light himself on fire, and charge towards his enemy while holding a bottle of gasoline. When he gets close he breaks the bottle, and ka-blewy!

The female form could break her knee, and twirl around like a ballerina, repeatedly slashing the enemy.

I really like the last one. In fact, his female form doesnt use a skirt like the guy but a ballerina dress.

Quote from: Jango the Duck on December 29, 2007, 01:22:39 PM
I'd suggest more craziness with his mouth (like biting people), use of syringes for activating supers, and lots and lots of twisting his body around in uncomfortable positions ala Zappa.

unconfortable positions! can't have enough of them  ;P
Peketo already has syringes although I should make him use them more.

Quote from: The Zorc on December 29, 2007, 03:11:51 PM
WoW, look very good, i like your chars
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Quote from: Blumentopf niggard dmagh ZZAB on December 29, 2007, 05:52:38 PM
Quote from: Makkah on December 29, 2007, 03:34:32 AM
You could make him break his arm, and use the exposed bone to stab his opponent.

I was just going to say that...
he holds one of his arms with the other arm, breaks his arm against his tibia, then impales his opponent with the broken bone which is still part of his arm...after he deals with the opponent, he performs a ritual which heals/gives him his arm back

mmm too complex.

Quote from: Blumentopf niggard dmagh ZZAB on December 29, 2007, 05:52:38 PM
stabs himself in the abdomen(stabbing the stomach in the process), then takes his stomach out, and squeezes it, squirting a stream of gastric juices/acid
doesnt look like torture.. Its more like a zombie attack, haha

Quote from: Blumentopf niggard dmagh ZZAB on December 29, 2007, 05:52:38 PM
an option, is that after the opponent is hit , after few seconds you can set him on fire...like Jagi in HNK
the opponent on fire or my char?

Quote from: Warbaster on December 29, 2007, 06:07:55 PM
Also, taking the heart directly into the body of the opponent (à la Rasetsumaru from Samurai Shodown) could be a nice finish move or Lv2 super.
i dont understand...

I have this move but can't find a practical use for it: wanna make him throw a projectile that just spins around my char, like a satellite and if the opponent gets closer he gets hit by the proj. but i dont know what he could use for that. And I also must find the way of making it not too cheap. maybe could be used for DF...
      
Little John from the big castle, plays with little friend,
snip! snip! snip! off goes his head, bright red! bright red!