Black Devotion...

[Jessy]

....in other words..Satanic Black Devotion...

full size:
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5443/devotionvj2.jpg

[Bastard Mami]

i really like the ideas behind your artwoks :/

[TempesT]

- Her stomach has an unnatural curve (very pointed, not smooth as a stomach should be)
- The proportions between the size of her head and the size/shape of her body is too unnatural as well.
- The hair you create always has a very ODD shine to it. Almost as if her hair was dipped in some bacon grease and left overnight.
- The eyes are too big compared to the mouth, since you're going for a more realistic/serious tone, you should try to get proportions in order.
- The hair was drawn too far to the left. Makes her head seem very large.

Overall you seem to have taken a few steps back from your last one. (I actually forget if that was the boob kick one or... something else)

But you need to spend a bit more time on these things.