first WIP Altair from "Assassins Creed"

[1st True Rican]

this is my first sprite but im new to making characters so how many do i need to make a full character and also ill take anybodys positive opinion on this. I used freeman as a base.


http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj53/Ricano9/editedaltairsprite.png

[DMK]

Still needs alot of work.

It's really choppy and far to skinny for him.

Perhaps look at a SF:A type char for his kinda bulk.

You got the color and stance alright but needs to be more filled out.

Might want to move to the GFX part pf the forum till you got the sprites done.

[[(_sourlucas_)]>]

Editing altair off of SFA guy might work well.

[Ryuji]

His stance is a little stiff, and Altair is a very agile person, so you might wanna take that into account.

[DMK]

Editing altair off of SFA guy might work well.

Thats who I was thinking of.

A change to the stance would be in order but I can see an easier transtion from Guy to Altair.

[Ryon]

its a very very excellent FREEMAN edit (Freeman is a character from Garou Mark Of The Wolves)

but i dont think Freeman's psychopathic mind would be good for Altair.. never the less keep going!

[IEatRamen]

i edited it a little  (yes, still needs work)

[LaQuak]

to bad the actual game blew shet.

For the idea. I hope you make it a nice creation. He is a swift assasin..cept when he let that girl go..Bitch move..I even remember getting her in the corner and I said out lout this bitchs about to die and after a dialouge he let her go.

[1st True Rican]

thanks for the advise guys. the reason i used freeman is because of his stance and the way he walk . Altair walks like that.

[Ryon]

he walks creepy?

LOL... i cant play Assassins Creed... but i'm gonna wait for it to be on the DS. same with Ninga Gaiden.

[1st True Rican]

he walks creepy?

LOL... i cant play Assassins Creed... but i'm gonna wait for it to be on the DS. same with Ninga Gaiden.

he walks a little bit like that. He needs to be descret in the game

[1st True Rican]

Heres a new sprite of Altair made from Guy. I say its better than the last one but positive critism is needed so i can make him better fully and for the community

http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj53/Ricano9/altairsprite.png

[DMK]

He has more of a vertical stance. You got the right idea. His overall look needs to change.

It's moving slowly but just got to keep up with the edits.

Think of that one character from that beat'em up game Ryon released.

Think of his stance except his arms more at his sides.

Keep the guy look but try to make it so his head is leaning down and his arms are at his sides.

[1st True Rican]

im just gonna use guys stance and walk. After that it might be different ???

[Ryon]

here he is

[1st True Rican]

here he is

interesting where can i find him.

[1st True Rican]

This the last sprite im showing for a while.http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj53/Ricano9/altairsprite2.png More positive comments plz and how do i make a sprite sheet for future reference

[Byakko]

More positive comments plz

While your attempt is commendable, I think this will prove a little difficult to do that.

and how do i make a sprite sheet for future reference

You don't need a spritesheet, you only need the bunch of sprites. But if you really want to put all your sprites in a single sheet, just enlarge the canvas of one sprite and paste all the others onto it. Not that it's any useful.

[1st True Rican]

More positive comments plz

While your attempt is commendable, I think this will prove a little difficult to do that.

and how do i make a sprite sheet for future reference

You don't need a spritesheet, you only need the bunch of sprites. But if you really want to put all your sprites in a single sheet, just enlarge the canvas of one sprite and paste all the others onto it. Not that it's any useful.

your right this will be hard because i want to make sprites so i can have sword and dagger modes and some hand to hand. but can i do animations in fighter factory

[DMK]

Like I said. You got the base idea. You just need to be more precise with the lines you draw over his original sprite.

Having a stance like that would be what you want.

The vowel needs to be more more over his head and his face perhaps a little like Shadow Dio's.

Not entirely without noticeable figures.

But upper half should be darker and gets lighter as it goes down.