Kyo Kusanagi...Again.

[Some Random Guy]

Alright, one more go at this guy...




Not done yet. The colours for his hair and face seem a bit flat. Anyway, CC always welcome...

[PotS]

His torso seems a bit too long, and the limbs are too thin but I guess 12 is like that too. Otherwise .

[~*Ishida-Uryuu*~]

omg sex

Some things:

- Like POTS said, torso is really long
- Shading on face and hair is way more detailed than the jacket and shirt
- Shoes need shading, but I imagine you knew that already
- Those prayer beads (lol Kyo stole Akuma's necklace) hanging from his pocket need more detail/shading
- Hands/gloves need shading
+ Hair shading looks fine

Besides the first two, I would assume you already knew about the rest. Otherwise, GUD JOV.

Are you planning on making more Kyo sprites/other characters?

[PotS]

He obviously hasn't finished shading yet.

[Blind.]

For me in thise size he need more details
And like other says to long torso but still great job

[Some Random Guy]

Thanks, guys.

So, it's unanimous, the torso's got to go...



And some Chizuru action as well...

[InterRage]

This Kyo guy needs to get bitch slapped.

[~*Ishida-Uryuu*~]

What...? O_o

[Bastard Mami]

That Chizuru looks hot, and just by making her pants tighter.

[MCX]

The arms doesn't fit with the torso. Just looks to his chowders.

[Some Random Guy]

The arms doesn't fit with the torso. Just looks to his chowders.

Yes, the arms are off, I couldn't quite figure it out. But what do you mean exactly?
"Chowders"?

[Formerly Hoshi]

The arms doesn't fit with the torso. Just looks to his chowders.

Yes, the arms are off, I couldn't quite figure it out. But what do you mean exactly?
"Chowders"?

I'm going to guess he meant "shoulders"

[Some Random Guy]

The arms doesn't fit with the torso. Just looks to his chowders.

Yes, the arms are off, I couldn't quite figure it out. But what do you mean exactly?
"Chowders"?

I'm going to guess he meant "shoulders"

Ah. That makes sense. My bad.
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    Well, a slight update:

[NiO ErZeBeTh]

cool, but I still see the torso too long, just imagine the muscles of his body (like a draw technique eeeeeh!!) and you will found it a bit long sized...   

but is looking great anyway.   

[ragnagar]

I think if you just raise the yellow belt higher that should fix the torso problem, not sure thought maybe that might make his legs look longer ???

[Some Random Guy]

Oh no! do people think it's a belt? That would explain a lot. It's actually a long shirt he's wearing underneath the brown one - about the length of his 99-2002 shirt.

It does kinda look like a sash, though, now I  come to think about it. I'll have do something about that. Hmm...

[Some Random Guy]

Now with 100% more Chizuru. WIP, of course...



...Edit/Update:



...I'll look into the shoulder thing...

[K.O.D]

Boobs are too small and not equal in size, they don't look as broad as chizuru's (taking perspective into account as well)

Her feet are horrible, too squarish and lack any detail.

[Rote Zaungast]

his right shoulder (artist's left) should decrease in height...I don't know...you should make it smaller than that, there's a perspective issue, the that position doesn't match his current body's pose


about Shizuru, the face in the sketch is way more hotter than the colored one, also use some brown or any other color bright enough to show the sexy details on the legs
also bigger boobs please!

[InterRage]

damn dude, this is some great art. Love the wrinkles in kyo's pants, especially kyo's right leg, it looks natural, although the shading needs some smoothing.