looks like vice

[moolambo]

don't you think? criticism is welcome, wanna draw 'better recognizable' girls.

fullsize: http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/125/img001pc0.jpg

[Rōjenomu]

spock!

but nice details on her arm
and is that her leg showing? if so it needs more subtile curves

[MDI]

Her face is kinda...creepy.

But everything else looks great. I love the details on the arm, and the shading overall is very nice.

[Rote Zaungast]

her head is fucked up proportionwise counting from the sideburns to the nose

I prefer to see a headless version, my brain would do the rest, if you see what I mean


I would say more about the face...

[moolambo]

feel free to speak up, i'm kinda curious

Her face is kinda...creepy.

why? 

[blunted]

but nice details on her arm

but she kind of looks like she has a unibrow.

[OZ]

The unibrow.

She also has a very weak chin.
Her nose is also very round and quite large.

Of course there's nothing wrong with this, it just makes her look homely.

[moolambo]

her head is fucked up proportionwise counting from the sideburns to the nose

I prefer to see a headless version, my brain would do the rest, if you see what I mean


I would say more about the face...

speak up, dude! 

[MDI]

Her face mainly doesn't fit because it looks like a man. Basically.

Along with what everybody else said about it. There just isn't anything feminine about her face in general.

[Rajaa Retired]

she reminds me of shiek from zelda

[moolambo]

k thank you all guys, got what i wanted. 

[c00p]

you can try something like this, more "generically femenine"

[OZ]

Coopers example addresses my issues.

The end of the eyebrow is visible, so it isn't implied that it is a unibrow.
The jaw is more defined and has a slightly more vertical line. (although the seperation of the chin and shoulder is still confusing.)
The nose is more pointed, with a smoother bridge.

Changes to the nose, eyes, and the lowering of the mouth also fixes her expression, which previously appeared to be one of disgust.

[MDI]

you can try something like this, more "generically femenine"

Good example! Much better.

[Rote Zaungast]

ok, it's just that I didn't have enough time


for the right form of the head you should start from her head's back half, which is appropriate, and round up a circle with a perimeter smaller than the first front part, so as to make it fit the back part better
the area between the eyes should be curved, if you are going with that nose
the bottom of the nose should be straight, the nostrils should be narrower than that I mean the end of the nose should be moved more to the direction where the noise is pointing...
give her a slightly relaxed eye...

do that and let's see how it comes out


edit: I was looking at cooper's while saying that , go on from his

[tetsuo9999]

you can try something like this, more "generically femenine"

Maybe she's suppose to look ugly.. ???

[moolambo]

omg that one you drawn looks awesome, i love both, they look like two emotionally different twins. disgust and empathy...
anyway there has been something i've understood so thanks everybody for the support. I know that there has been something 'weird' about the position of her eyes, the shape of her eyebrow and the nose/front thing, cooper's example fitted very well my doubt (but i still like my version too   ). thanks, arthur.

Maybe she's suppose to look ugly..

maybe yes, since I love 'ugly' girls (but i don't really see why you say 'ugly', matter of tastes i guess...)

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does she look 'ugly' in your opinion? she's kinda nice imho and many people told me that she 'was' ugly.

[c00p]

err ... thanks, but i actually just edited your original draw. You know, a few resizes and that, didn't took more than 20 mins. Even the eyes, i just make them smaller 
and no, that's not an ugly girl, but in your sketch the face looked pissed of/scared. The problem was the expression more tan the anatomy (well, maybe the head was a bit large)

[Some Random Guy]

Nice face. Uh - it is Shiki, right?

[moolambo]

dunno who is shiki, neo geo battle coliseum? (i just googled out...)