Self Sprite.

[fer619]

great job, BC.

So that's how you look like, eh?

[flipthemaster]

Has some decent animations. However, you might want to fix the creases on the shirt, they seem kind of awkward.

[BC]

great job, BC.

So that's how you look like, eh?

nah far more uglier 

Has some decent animations. However, you might want to fix the creases on the shirt, they seem kind of awkward.

Thanks, im surpised the animations turned out as half decent as they did as i stated it wasnt my strong point... and i agree with you about the creases, thinking of how creases would move in certain positions is kinda difficult, i think creases are harder than shadows,

Creases on the knee bends are easy as anything, on a loose t-shirt thats a different story(well for me anyway)..

but ill try to improve them after i get some more animations out, as only slight adjustments would need to be made.

[BC]

been working on a couple of other animations


uppercut elbow...



i think it needs 2 more frames, but im happy with the look so far.


straight punch...



might need some minor tweaks..


game speed will be different.

[DonuTs]

quite good for some basic attacks. i think the elbow is done quite well but not to sure about that "fade" effect or whatever its called, dnt think youve applied ti right

also the shading on his lower half during the straight punch probabluy needs some work it doesnt flow properly throught out ther animation seems as if the light source changes during some frames

[BC]

thanks for the feedback...

agreed on the lower half shading of the punch.

ive updated the elbow slightly



shirt movement on last frame was added.


and i definatly think the blur frame of the elbow sucks(there i said it for ya )

so ill tweak that somewhat.

[DonuTs]

ahh thats the word lol thanks 

movement of t-shirt is a lot better, your sprite work is increasing with each sprite you post

[BC]

thanks


im gonna go tweak that blur frame, and fix the pants shading on the punch... dunno why i made the light source move around like that seeing as his legs dont move a whole lot lol

[Dr. H]

One thing I'm finding weird is that the waist (hope it's the actual word for that) is considerable wider than the shoulder...

[BC]

Dr H.....the t-shirt is quite baggy  but ya your prob right lol.




improved blur frame

[OZ]

That actually looks pretty good.
I like the animation.
Sorry for the lack of usuable feedback, I'll take a closer look when I'm more awake.

[DonuTs]

the blur looks much better now, more like what i had in mind 

[TITAN MADRE]

good enough
btw...you need to start a diet

[Bastard Mami]

add an extra frame to the blur so you keep the one you have, then one frame later you have the same frame buth with the elbow trail dithered with the transparent color. snkp has been using that method and it's pretty decent.

[ARCoolguy]

are you planning on making this a W.I.P

if you are cool i would like to download it

[BC]

good enough
btw...you need to start a diet

??? no.... im not obese. i was taking reference from a photo, the pants are really baggy.... and so is the t-shirt.

mayb my sprite needs a diet.

dd an extra frame to the blur so you keep the one you have, then one frame later you have the same frame buth with the elbow trail dithered with the transparent color. snkp has been using that method and it's pretty decent.

thanks for the tip.

are you planning on making this a W.I.P

if you are cool i would like to download it

all will be announced soon...

its a full game, we are all working on a similar sprite style and shade style.

[moolambo]

improved blur frame

try to remove the outline from that 'blurred' frame, since outlines give 'too much shape' to that colored area in my opinion..

[DonuTs]

I think the outline compliments the sprite style that he is using. if he removes that outline he might as well remove the outline he has around the shins and arms

[TITAN MADRE]

wait
you need at the end one more sprite
a relax arm move

[moolambo]

if he removes that outline he might as well remove the outline he has around the shins and arms