Kazuya

[ARCoolguy]

How does this Kazuya i made look

[spidy]

shoulders is not good

[ARCoolguy]

How about this

[spidy]

nope use daimond body from King of fighter

[greatmuta2]

it looks ok for a drawing but if i heard correctley you plan on making him a char and well if thats how he'll look sorry but i will not be downloading him but you just need some practice and youll get it

[ARCoolguy]

YOu mean like this

[Ohsky]

looks very bad, can that be said?

[TITAN MADRE]

maybe this help you

check the shoulder and arm

Spoiler (click to show)

[Alkanphel]

looks very bad, can that be said?

Nah, it just needs better shading that's all.

[spidy]

need more practice

[[[D4RK_R4V3N]]]

 this looks awful 

[Mineko C. Lucky]

Don't try to draw, try doing it dot per dot instead. I hate to say but this looks bad. I agree with Muta and I won't download it.

Try starting him again with a body frame, like what I did to my characters. Use any drawing program to draw a circular head, an oval body and two oval legs. Then start drawing the head until it looks good, move to the body and slowly it will turn out great.

Fill the spaces with colours of your choice first, then you can add shades according to the light direction of your choice. Details come in at the very last point.

[OZ]

And so it begins again.



As for feedback:
Current drawing is a perspective disaster.

We see his chest straight on, even though he is turned to the side.
His left leg, which is assumed to be farthur back, actually comes in front of his right leg, which is assumed to be closer to the viewer.
You've created an Escher.

Shading on his left arm (our right) is inexplicable.
The shape of said arm can only be explained if the arm is made out of balloons.

His right shoulder (our left) gives the impression that he is made of paper, with the arm simply folding over at the shoulder.

The face is decidedly 2-dimensional; no illusion of depth at all.


Overall, it reminds me of a Hieroglyphic.



Now, I may be beating a dead horse, but it must be said.
While you have admittedly improved, your work on ANATOMY and PERSPECTIVE need MASSIVE work.

Learn these basics before working on anything else.

[ARCoolguy]

maybe this help you

check the shoulder and arm

Spoiler (click to show)

Oh so this is what you mean

And so it begins again.



As for feedback:
Current drawing is a perspective disaster.

We see his chest straight on, even though he is turned to the side.
His left leg, which is assumed to be farthur back, actually comes in front of his right leg, which is assumed to be closer to the viewer.
You've created an Escher.

Shading on his left arm (our right) is inexplicable.
The shape of said arm can only be explained if the arm is made out of balloons.

His right shoulder (our left) gives the impression that he is made of paper, with the arm simply folding over at the shoulder.

The face is decidedly 2-dimensional; no illusion of depth at all.


Overall, it reminds me of a Hieroglyphic.



Now, I may be beating a dead horse, but it must be said.
While you have admittedly improved, your work on ANATOMY and PERSPECTIVE need MASSIVE work.

Learn these basics before working on anything else.

well most of that which you have pointed out i have to presume wrong or i have to presume namco is wrong
look at this

[Orochi Gill]

What the hell is that? The proportions are all wrong. His hands are tiny, and his left hand looks backwards. His belt is sideways.

Spriting is not your thing, I see.

[OZ]

Now tell me, have you changed anything other than the neck? (which frankly has made it look worse)

When you 'update' you make very miniscule, trivial changes, and very rarely listen too any advise/feedback that any of us give you.


This sprite has some BIG problems.
The neck, which was workable before you started messing with it, is the very least of your worries.

[ARCoolguy]

Here

[greatmuta2]

Here

is he standing on a building 

[K.O.D]

again, quit spriting.

[~*Ishida-Uryuu*~]

why are you all putting up with this troll?